street life...topical battle verse...nice deep shit here
 

i just gotta survive try n stay alive in life i thrive
on drugs and enemys scheaming, the streets hard i cnt deny
everyday the streets try and destroy you from the inside
push my heart out my chest still beating, life is declined
by death on the streets owned and run by killers everyday
everybody gettin me for nuttin, n wont let me pray
cold blood taste good to thugs, for them its tantelising
selling drugs making big dough and then start enterprises
getting sucked in deeper, body infested with crack
ya get hit once and then again u gotta hit back
be that kid who can stand his own, or get taken out
once u in it you in it for good, ya cant be fakin now
cause thats ya life ended, you been in too deep
say one word wrong and then everybody wanna shoot me
feel hazy as the polution flows around my system
see them thugs chillin and u wanna get with them
but you dont know what you in for, a life of turmoil
see loved ones die gets u heated and ya heart boils
god created this earth and it was us he tested
but didnt help us at all and streets left infested
with sinners..so lemme guess who wanna beat me tonight
cause like u r now, i got sucked in n the streets eat me alive



the topic was basically

street life - expand

Tight piece , i know how u feelin dawg ,,,,,cause i exprienced that shit once ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44162

im guessing you like nas because thi reads like one of his pieces.
im not gonna lie and say that it was fucking dope. it was ok. nothing about the drop really stood out. not bad though. At least your not rapping about ice.

peace

oh and elevate yo

-BMUSE

my style is to be slightly religious and put that descriptive sound in naw mean nas is what influenced me this is one of my worse peices prolly my worse drop for like 4 years lol

Iiight