i donno jus some shyti wrote ~ gemme some feed back
 

Immature496: you say you gonna give me 3 seconds..thats all the time i need to take your existence and wreck it...hiding behind nonsense thrown together to avoid your lack of substance...you aint a thug you posted once at 8:30 a.m. and i doubt you were coming off a coke rush..if a thug gets up at noon its about an hour to soon...the only drugs you've done is helium from your lil sisters ballon...you said lets light one up for biggie and pac...i've got others to mourn from my own block...what you a thug and you dont know any who have been shot...show me your hood so i can relax in that spot...you spit a lot of sh*t but be honest bit*h you ever felt heat on your hip...anger in your soul enough to make you blast..no instead you internet rap...hating on all trying to flex...fuk u ...you are not a threat...you claim no set...i see through you like i am right there...i am in your shitty soul and i wont let go...till you promise not to post nonsense no more...

...you aint a thug you posted once at 8:30 a.m. and i doubt you were coming off a coke rush..if a thug gets up at noon its about an hour to soon...
^^ thats a tite line just because its true lol

nice lil drop...but you should fix the structure. other than that it was straight

yeo sway u did tight i like those ryhmes there. but yeo go on u gonna do good there buddy...lol

this drop could have been better ,,,,,,,,, but overall u get a 6/10

your lyrics is tight i think keep it up