Mentill VS Detonata
 

30 Lines Max....10 Min...

Check In By:Wednesday
Post Verse By:Friday
Voting Ends:Sunday

No/Biting/Recycling

No D/R

I wasn't on yesterday...And I didn't see these up on Tuesday so I wasn't able to check in...If it's a DQ fucc it...If not...I'll drop my verse 2morrow...Peace

Same here, i couldnt get to the site.

*His Sig. .

Why try? When I can beat you with a half assed rhyme
my dick hates your mom,
guess that’s why its giving her a Hard time.
Lets get down to buisness, the 'Future Of Hiphop*' dosent involve you,
Heard your girls legs got Reported, all I did was help Spread the News.
you'll stay herbish until you drop that style your blessing,
i'll take you to the top of a cliff, then give you a step in the right direction.
im fast, witty with punches, plus my wordings dope,
and i'll turn that Chip on your shoulder to a couch Potato
^first eight lines and its over. id Mountain attack at your Peak
i dont call this battling, i call this shit upping my win streak.
and this week, i cant believe im battling somebody this weak
so after i make you Bite the Dust, i'll give you a Taste of Defeat.

Fucc it...

Dawg wat's tha point of comin' off so wack? U shoulda decided to hesitate
His posts almost double mine, And I can tell most of 'em weren't used tryna elevate
Check his avatar, Homies a feather weight, Tha last easy win U had was tha only live ya left
Look at this cat talkin' 'bout dickin' my mom over tha net, He's a vet, When it comes to cyber sex
It took U 8 2 kill me, Or so U say, And by my fifth, I already got ya fan base on my dick
Im typin' this verse 4 nuthin', Cuz after readin' ya wack verse they'll look 4 tha "x" & single click
Prick, Tha only excitin' part of his post was tha bitchin' and whinin' but I ain't hearin' it
But it's all expected cuz his little portrait of himself looks like he's all up on his period
Detonata, Got PunchLines? No, Cuz like tha milk commercial now a days they don't exist
This is rapbattles not MTV, But fucc it I still got this lame excuse for an MC dismissed

vote!

Both of these verse were not that impressive but I'll have to give Detonata the win. His punches were a little bit harder and he had better flow.

1-0, uppin!

Tha last easy win U had was tha only live ya left
Look at this cat talkin' 'bout dickin' my mom over tha net, He's a vet, When it comes to cyber sex

LoL dat shit was funny as hell, I have to give muh vote to MentiLL on this 1.

Ok, so after the herbs are ignored, its 1-1 i guess, lol.

Wats up wit those 2 verses in this thread? Fuccin' newbz...Blah...Peace

This is why you should try ro get your verses in early
1-1Tie....No one wins

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