D-Dizzle\\\vs///Lyricbrutalizer
 

same rules

^^^ What type of joke ass shit is that, ha, ha, ha. You had a whole weekend to prepare for me and you STILL don't got your shit!????. just shut the fuck up and listen to a pro rap

yo....

Duckin bullets,can't freestyle worth shit no need-ta-retreat,-herb
go run to you little ghostwriter at school,that mu'fucka can't beat-me-neither/
My shit resemble Hennessey straight,you 'mimic the taste of kool aid-pictures'
I'm not interested in your 'punchlines', I rather wait-for-liquor/
It's advaced-what-my-skills do,defying-yo-breath-til-collapse
you get anxiety-depressive-attacks and die before I have a chance-to-kill-you/
Breakin ya face with techs in a blaze …I’ll slaughter you hoe
The thang that gets slain is section of brain…I walked in you froze/
You won't cite where you from, cuz it's a bitch made town of hicks-and-clowns
if you in my nervous system then I'm imune to you,travel my bloodstream and shit-you-out/
You 'trickin' credit card gifts for yo squad',Illegal crew sucks yo 'dick-till-it's-hard'
so now it's clear to figure out why you 'head-nigga-in-charge'/

....look fuck nigga
Advise you nor your sissy boys not to show off, come on yo stage cut cut yo show off/
you a bug that scatter from the spray when I show Off
shoot ya in the head, ya life switch gon show...off/

It's nothin.....

hold on

Here’s your first lesson
no crew means no protection
without waring I’ll change directions
like a Jason Sehorn* interception
no game detected
Heres my objective
Give him a lethal injection
Make his lyrics defective

Don’t think your rhymes are tighter than mine
This is my prime-time.
You only worth a half a dime
While you wait-for-liquor you can serve my lyrics specially catered
Making people say “Can I have the Byrutalizer special" D-Dumb Waiter

If Im in your blood-stream
Im Keroscene
quick to ignite
and blow up the scene
Im electricfying you makin you punchlines spellout S-T-A-T-I-C
Makin your flows erratic
Your game is as lame as your name
Dizle the name speaks for itself Da Da-Dummy
Lyric Knocks-you-Out
Taken “Da Detroit” studder out yo mouth
They didn’t believe me until East meet South

uppin fa votes

vote=lyric
he came a tad bit harder the battle was tight

this battle was iaght lyricbrutalizer had some good lines but i think lyricbrutalizer got him with the studder thing.

still uppin fa votes holla back yall

uppin 2-0 me

Not really playa, only poll votes count and dem niggas up there can't vote 'cuz it's only registered voters and mods for this section.

aight then 0-0 still uppin fa votes

.....Aiight.....Here It Is........Respect It..........................This Battle Was Okay.........Dizzle Used Creative Punchlines And Wordplay.....Even Though All That Underlinin' And Boldin' Letters Ain't Really Doin Nothin Just Makin It Harder To Read..............LyricBrutalizer Rode Off His Verse And For Me......I Don't Like When Cats Feed.........But Even With Feedin' He Didn't Deliver No Real Punches......The Wordplay Was Whack........Like The Whole 'Prime Time.....Dime' Crap.....Booty..........Didn't Enjoy His Verses Whatsoever............All In All My Vote Goes To D-Dizzle For Better WordPlay And Punches........................................... .....1

yea this battle was booty. Dizzle loses some props for all the underlinin and italicizin. U remind me of my ol boy Malphunxion. But even sayin that Dizzle wins just off of creativity but dizzle u accentin them words hard, need to work on ya multis.

vote - dizzle

'Twas close, and hopefully not the Best of Both Worlds.. However, Brutalizer built off of Dizzle's, which is a proverbial no-no..

"While you wait-for-liquor you can serve my lyrics specially catered"

Punches: Tie
Flow: Dizzle
Metas: Tie
Wordplay: Not Much.. Tie
Multis: Dizzle by a hair (more complex)

SUGGESTIONS: To both of you, don't use the bold and italicized letters to emphasize punches and other fine points, makes the given devices seem forced.

Brutalizer: Don't build, make a flow in a more simple format..
Dizzle: Sometimes, the rhyme scheme and flow you used are going to be too complex for this particular setting (if you catch my drift).. a sublinimal tip..

^^^
yeah do what he said--- he is right



Vote: Dizzle... this was easy