i fucked up real bad..forgive me
 

juj

is it true?

I have a message from Jeff... He says he forgives you... j/k

Thats not quite poetry. It didn't flow to great. Not a big vocabulary. You'd think a ballad like that would have a lot more metas too. Elevate bro... -1-

i felt it good man but ya gotta have good vocab overall i think it was pretty hot.

plz vote on "My theory of life" thx peace out man