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Whyte_Boyz 05-07-03 07:16 PM

*First Spit*
 
Heres my first spit.... To the beat of Ja's Emerica....

Let me do my thing as i enter the room/
I know you starin at my color gettin ready to boo/
You stereotype, I got all this hype cause im white/
but I can still rock tha mic, my flows tight/
My rhymes be ill, but not as ill as you think/
My vocabs to small/ Im not even allowed ta drink/
But look, Im still a young'n, If i heard a gunshot, i'd probably be runnin/im a puss, and the whole world knows it/ if you tryed to pick some sh!t with me i'd say go blow dick,and run./ Cause ya"ll could kick my ass no lie, if i tryed to fight back i'd get murdered and die./ The names Whytee, Whyteboyz fo'real,i know i aint black and i could get killed. But look, i can do what i want/ so F*ck ya"ll haters if you want me ta drop.

That is a peice of shit if you dont have the beat in your head. But oh well, im a beginner.

Bash 05-07-03 09:15 PM

Whack!!!!!!!!! work on ur vocabulary and wordplay

tRiLL 05-08-03 07:50 AM

i agree with bash, wack wack wack

Narcicyst 05-08-03 08:05 AM

wackness is the rigth word...the fuck was that..reading that polluted my mind...work on your shit dunny...wahid

Enigmatic 05-08-03 09:14 AM

.Newbie.
 
Damn, I ain't gonna put it like everyone else did, but you gotta work on your wordplay a little. It was a good beat in the beginning, then in the end, you just meshed it all together. Keep workin' on it dunny, holla.

TriX 05-08-03 03:35 PM

Guys I dont kno if this dude has the word WACK in his vocab!

RythmicTendicies 05-08-03 05:36 PM

yo, hes only new..
don't worry kid, everyone started off with "wackyness", you'll get better - BELIEVE ME!


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