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kool-killa V.s CarsonJet
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no crew vote no dik vote ----------------- i'll be back in a bit ta chek up on this |
k, waitin on you to spit....dont worry...i wont verse feed...i just wanna make sure you show up with good rhymes...
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Yo i drop bombs of nuclear proportions on mista kool-aid// battlin me... have ya wishin u taken 15th grade// unable to stand or withhold my vocabularic dominance// thinkin ya had a chance.. musta been... deep within a trance// judgin by what u write u still havent completely recovered// lyricly unacclaimed be tha pre writtens of ya label cover// 3-4, wel go head an notch anotha// 4-0 well now ya lost ta da atonym of brotha// wrap ya up in a cacoon.... verse ontoppa verse// try unwrap ya self, but da intensity... has built ya hearse// shoulda stayed in school, wish ya played life in reverse// claimin by ya avatar ya be mista jak da rippa// but tha only jak ya rippin be da ass of anotha nigga// its ova now ya been played by CarsonJet// Fuel leakage leave ya drenched of intoxication resedue full of text// next// peace... |
ayo, this is a real freestyle....imma kick it first since ya takin forever...yall vote for the real shit, not cyborgs and shit...cuz i put effort into the disses....
------------------------------------- yo, check one two, check ya self foe, say what say what say what? yo look at this carson jet~cudn't be dope if hes spits out Phet// my rhymes show you some sweat~like you was playin russian roulette// copiying eminem like he was Bunny .rabbit// the fact hes obssesed with a man shows hes a faggot// have yall READ what he SAID~he sucks so much he earns the name dick-HEAD// i'll muder this bitch brutally, to show some cruelty, but the fact he hangs out with kids usaully, shows he hasn't hit the age of puberty// hold on let me shed some light, wearin small rubber you dont come tight// now i know your verse is bittin~addin to the fact that you prewritten// i spit shit thats original--i can tell that aint you, cuz you rhymes is fictional// it dont matter if you hide and seek~i'll drop ya like girls cuz you dick is weak// this fool might get chics~but its sad and sick~ that he lost his verginity on his dads dick// This wack fool--needs to go to school--cuz his rhymes remind me of ja-rule// |
whoa!!! ok rhyme.....nice timing!!! lmao!!! we dropped at the same time....i was gonna drop first cuz you took a while but oh well.....lets see votes
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naw my shit was wak...i was runnin into walls line afta line....i jus said fuk it an posted.......good luck
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ayo comon yall cut the slack...ive just voted on a whole buch of other battles....so return the fava
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carson jet sucks ......man u pathetic, and if you want a challenge set up sumthing in a pm or shit. Yur shit is so damn old. Let the lord be with your ass......!!!!!!! peace, 1one1
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aight ill give this one Kool-Killa because he had better punches he went at u hard....carsonjet really did have any and i felt kool-KIlla's better cause he flowed nice...........i dont have enough to poll vote but my vote go's to Kool-Killa...aight one holla back
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ayo, i wud appreciate it if you dropped a vote without freeposting in the battle dawg....;)
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are u talking to me dawg cause im not freeposting...........aight anyways one holla back at ur boy...........
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oh never mind im blind i see u talkin to grimey won right..........my fault at that one.........aight one holla back at ur boy...........
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Yeah I agree wit dee above, Carson just ain't have enough punches. Think of it like a boxin match, can't box wit out throwin punches. Vote=kool
Wit dat said, vote on my battle. This dude tried to get on me cuz I live in Japan and say nigga. He didn't realize I just moved to Japan and I'm black. one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1415#post411415 |
ayo can you poll in your vote man, cuz your vote dont count without that....thanx dawg....
ill be hittin ya battle in a while |
kool killa gets my vote, just had harder punches, other kid has improved a bit but needs to get better
can ya drop a vote in the poll... chrisis vs. kerrdezzy thanx pcccccc |
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