The Gifted And Confused(deep joint)
 

I trade my thoughts for feelings a wise man thick in his spending
My conscience is spittin these kryptings...I'm still not understandin life's meaning
This heart is sunk underneath me...locked beneath an abstract cage
I must read this chapter thuroughly...but I'm still flippin the page
Stood at an incomperable stage...cease to believe that I have fallen
Lookin back at a narrowed distance...hear a faint whisper thats callin
Is this my time for existence?...or am I being set up for extinction?
Life's situations left me twisted...look for miracles but what is religion?
With God as my witness...whats the reason for troubled tears without forgiveness?
I'm on trial till the day I die...with a case that will never become dis-missed
The talented and gifted...are the reasons spirits have still been mentioned
Creative inventions compliment extensives...they make the smartest decisions
But given the worst inflictions...emotions rise and stay bottled inside
An this innovative population...contemplates temptations of suicide
A beautiful mind eliminated...a useful waste has been demonstrated of this dying race
This is why I'll never understand life...until I've exited this mistake



*If ya'll don't understand the depth of this....It's basically explaining why life can be confusing...An the rare population of the talented(musicians, artists, actors, etc.), can have the hardest time an take the easy way out....It shows what the world is made of...an how we handle it.......

That was hot, I like that it was deep

Uppin for more feedback please

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damnnn I really enjoyed readin this piece ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, every line was madd Ill

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Thanks for the feedback ya'll its much appriciated............uppin...................... .................

fuck this.. all these peeps givin' two sentence feedback.. a'ight... you had a sick rhyme there.. flow and multies were str8.. the deep meaning of a power struggle thru talent was bod.. yo, the rythm was so easy to follow as-well.. tight piece dawg..

felt this piece dawg...
some nice shit...
put across your point well...
keep rhymin...

Fiori

Thanks for feedback keep it comin

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Please keep the good feedback comin everyone.........................................m uch appriciated

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