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Bmack 05-08-03 06:58 PM

space
 
Lyrical hatas try to free their minds like emancipators/

Rhyme greater vocabs cross the panama equators/

Got emcees hard turnin into persistent masturbators/

No dictionary needed for the journey I seek/

And no lyrics being repeated so you can rhyme critique/

Many people confuse me to something inferior/

But when I spit the smoke clears and I still become superior/

The results of hard work, time ,and training/

Is the outcome of thoughts rhymes and stormbraining/

But wait its reversed I think I just lost my train of thought on this verse/

Time for my pen to disperse on actions on loose leaf paper/

It's like every bars a mystery a constant chapter caper/

Veins in my head starting to appear/

Hands to temple as my mind starts to clear/

Alot of crews doubt me and threw me in the trash/

Like I'm smokin Blunt MC but in the end hes cash/

And Enigmatic also rejected me from the crew/

But La Familia is that mexican? then why you run with jews/

Then the Killa Instinkz little message forum/

Man I posted there they cried little bitches should've saw them/

"Dont write on our boards get out"/

Sounded like Shannon Tweed and Carmen Electra cryin with a dick in they mouth/

I tried showin off and becomin a agent free/

But everyone hated and no one accepted me/

So if I have to be alone to spit/

I'll come off as a one man crew shits unfortunate/

Not for me but for you all to see/

That losing aint in my agenda all there is victory/

I dont need metaphors punches or big words to impress/

Cause half the emcees here that hate wear a dress/

That means no meat between the two legs you got/

Talkin about murder and violence and who's gonna get shot/

I see gimmicks and fairty tales galore/

Verses about slappin whores and Impalas with suicide doors/

Ya'll know this shit is fake and its got to end/

That's why this is goin first class to you I send/

That this open mic is turning sour/

Cause each time a rookie join this forum rapbattles.com done lost its power/

We got five year olds on here tryin to spit/

And thats makin the veterans start to quit/

What I'm sayin is give the talent a chance and give the garbage a toss/

Cause anyone without skills here isnt a missed loss/


*one*

Bmack 05-08-03 08:06 PM

I take back what i said about the crew issue,

Sultans of Rap is my crew I rep now.

New crew coming soon

Da Lyrical Ninja and I have agreed to terms

Bash 05-08-03 09:19 PM

But La Familia is that mexican? then why you run with jews/


Lol , , , this was an aight piece

da lyrical ninja 05-08-03 11:54 PM

yea man dat was hot bmack i luv da rap and u and me we gunna do great things holla

Bmack 05-09-03 09:02 AM

thanx for the uppin


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