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Bloomquist 05-08-03 08:21 PM

My Defenition Of RAP
 
My rhymes are insane, blow up like propane/
Better watch out cause im comin down ure lane/
You mgiht think this aint a poem, but its expressing myself/
Rappins about truth, aint about all the wealth/

Been in this rap game for only a couple of years/
Best rap you can get is on sale at SEARS/
Feel so bad wanna blow you up wit a gat/
only type a pussy you gonna get is from a cat/

Makin poems bout love, and some bout life/
mess you up so bad, cut ya up like Cloud Strife/

Hip hop theese days, lyrics gettin lower, not higher/
as Run DMC said "Sucka Emcee's Should Call Me Sire!"
Freestylin till the break of dawn/
wake up at 2:00 and make up a song/
Waitin for some friends on my block, gotta sit hear and wait/
This is what rap means, thats why its so great/


Hey ya'll hope ya like this one too tell me what ya think.
If you can plz comment me on my other poems..."My Thoery On Life"...and..."My Love"...thx yall peace out.

Eviley 05-08-03 10:46 PM

i liked it had a nice flow but can use a little work.....

Bloomquist 05-08-03 10:47 PM

ya thx for the reply and thx for commentin on my other poems

peace out

Mad Man 05-09-03 11:40 AM

This sounded a lot more like an open mic, then a poetic scripture alright.

Bloomquist 05-09-03 11:59 AM

aite thx for the reply and check out my other stuff...ill check out ya battle

peace out


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