a lil rap
 

Ima 18 yr old white female frum Alabama yea I rap
Got a problem wit it lets battle it out
I wear baggy clothes, du rags, an cornrows
I luv guyz who teeth be platinum or gold
I do my own thang in my own way
Dey say I wont make it in rap cuz ima white gurl
Dat wha chu think ima sho da world
Muh gurl used to get me pissed
She claim crip but suck blood dick
I thought crip n blood wuz fightin not luvin
I guess dat how it goes when ya friend iz a hoe
Muh boi Brian dat muh bro he thurr fa me no matta wha da drama b
When I roll thru Stevenson brothas spit game at me.........

Ai yo.....for being ya first post....its ok.......but ya gone need alotta work girl....

Ya flow was choppy....it would rhyme for a line...then the next three lines didn't at all...

Go read open mics, battles, poetry, an write from ya heart...then keep postin drops like this to continue to elevate....I'm not hatin on a girl....just tellin ya keep droppin.....we all gotta start somewhere

thanx fa da advice DaWg