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Kosta 05-09-03 12:20 PM

Ryan is smiling.
 
sand...whats with that fag poetry shit.
wheres the battle raps...cmon man.

a mind is a gaze into yesterdays beginnings.
watch time as it plays a gamblers winnings.
endlessly swimming hault to wait here stop.
i swim in emotion for oceans were gods teardrops.
fear not the clear dock set sale into merchandise.
and look for love so long it starts to hurt your eyes.
absurd the lies the disturbed will try without remorse.
roll a merchants dice to the curb and trice but what for.
fuck more solidly i ask of the unamed and still whore.
i beg of william to destroy subliminal billboards.
kill sores to possess a deeper pain shrink the rain.
until it sings with strain believe the gain so profane.
how could goodtimes be the cause for so much pain.
doesnt make sense at least no to me. so why win.
and as i sleep at night i am filled with glee. knowing that


ryan is smiling.........
because the lips are his......



...look what goes on inside my head...

RythmicTendicies 05-09-03 12:23 PM

tight drop dawg!

was really feeling this drop:
"absurd the lies the disturbed will try without remorse.
roll a merchants dice to the curb and trice but what for.
fuck more solidly i ask of the unamed and still whore."

was tight! :)

Atetrack define' 05-09-03 12:32 PM

whers the battle raps...ahhahaha...

whos ryan dun??i liked that little comment shit,
ryan is smilin,
coz the lips are his...
that shit is a thoguht maker nahmean...

fuck more solidly i ask of the unamed and still whore.
i beg of william to destroy subliminal billboards

^^ fuckin nice sand,as usual....

Kosta 05-09-03 12:36 PM

lol....
eva is my kind of girlfriend
and i love her a lot. but she
has recently informed me
that she really loves this boy
in san antonio where she
used to live. and when she
visits him. she has to show
she loves him. his name is
ryan. and he is most likely
smiling. and his aim has
goodtimes in it. so thats
that. and eva is still the
most amazing girl in the
world and i would give any
thing to have her all to
myself....lol

Atetrack define' 05-09-03 12:52 PM

ohh i see now...my bad...well dun she aint worth it,or she dont deserve the shit youd treat her with if shes gonna be going with someone else nahmean...i saw the othr rhymes you did...i felt ya mad..
bismillah

Bash 05-09-03 06:48 PM

Nice piece

PleDge 05-09-03 11:40 PM

na man that gurl is kinda um how do a say it....not worth it. man ya deserve a gurl ta ya self...neva settle fo second best

Maven 05-09-03 11:53 PM

this is an amazing piece. It was realy poetic and kept a sick flow at the same time, and god knows I've been working on that for a long time. these people saying she ain't worth it, well, it's up to you if she is or isn't. the choice is yours

Kosta 05-10-03 12:16 PM

she is most definatly worth
all i have to offer...but things
are fucked up sometimes.
i pray everynight that me and
her workout together..


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