Born to Kill vs. The Notic
 

Checking in...
Dropping in a second...
Just getting this up there...

Ok...
Like I said in Bitch Slapped...
20 Line Max...
No Flippin

Here ya go...

Feeling literary...
Bumping some fantasy shit...
Going back in time...
Now...



Once upon a time, in a land far away, two little babies were born...
The Notic grew to a jester, Born to Kill, a king with regal clothing worn...
The King was fond of his jester, his cute little rhymes amused him...
Sometimes The Notic would vary his act, don boots and Riverdance his limbs...
Everything was cool in the kingdom, until that fateful day...
The Notic's head grew too big for his shoulders, his ego got carried away...
See, Born to Kill was a good King, he let his jester get laid, and threw him gold dimes...
He let him have weekends off, and beat up on the mimes.
The Notic was great at funny verses, but now he thought he could spit...
So King Born stepped up, to show him...jesters and spitters don't fit.
Before the battle, the King let him know, trying to take Camelot has a price...
Lose the battle and you lose your life, if I could, I'd behead you twice!
The Notic kept his nuts, they're heads started to butt, and immediately the jester was reeling...
Verbal daggers and steel swords, Notic screamed from the pain he was feeling!
So Born to Kill showed mercy, opened wide his jersey, and let the Notic spit a whack attack!
Harmless lines and jumbled flow, nothing that even broke skin...
The King reared back and with a final attack, aimed for clown-face, and plunged his sword in!
The Notic became a dead ass jester, who should have known his place...
The Moral:
Clowns shouldn't try to be Kings, like fat men shouldn't race!

The End

haha nice story man ill vote wants noc spits gl to you both by the way nice finisher good shit (i messed up on reading it first time but nice shit anyway)

Thanks for the props, Ghostie...
Much appreciated.
Just something that popped in my head last night.
It was meant to amuse.
Glad it did.

Yo, man...
Drop your shit!
The whole weekend's passed and nothing?
What up?
Hope you show today, dude...
Don't want to forfeit.

Yo, Notic...

This one looks open to me.
Drop it here, dude.
Spit your shit, it'll get voted on.
Peace man, and good luck.

Yo, born to kill
vote on my battle wit youngblood:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46119

You aint got the dick ~ or even the pussy to fuck with me!/
Ill hit you with rhymes so dirty your lungs fill with debris/
No positive side to your sorry ass cus you a failure/
Bitch~ill put you more down under than Australia/
You persist to blunder~call me thore cus strike you with thunder/
My foot has a mouth and kicking your ass is its hunger/
Your bodys a giant “bowel” cus you “full of shit”/
That means your brain is the damn “colon” producing it!!/
I leave you shook~and steal the spotlight like a dim crook/
Wouldn’t feel your lyrics if you smacked me with your lyric book/
Boy your rhymes are so dry your tongue needs chap/
Ill tear you to scraps~to show the world your ass cant rap/
You cant produce saliva so I guess you cant spit/
Not even after sucking dick cus you tend to swallow it!/
Man u no dat u lost jus accept defeat/
The Notic is too far superior 2 u; jus call me elite/
Put a d on ma name cus beating yous a Delite/
Get the facts right~im dope and you’re a piece shite/!"................ the notic

uh i think Notic lost the plit here. He obviously didnt read the rules and went on his own. Duznt matta hes piece wasnt crash hot.

VOTE => Born To Kill <=

Please vote up, people...
I'll return the favor if you drop a vote here.
Vote what you feel, but please just vote.
I'm just wanting a winner here, be it me or him.
Thanks much.
Peace

Man...
Been a couple of days and no votes...
Man, I'll go vote happy if someone will toss something this way.
Him or me, doesn't matter...
Please vote.
Thanks
Peace