The Life Of A Child(My Theory On Life 2)
 

Yo made this after my first poem (My Theory On Life). People seemed to like it so i thought i'd spit another one. Tell me waht ya think.


A childs mind is a vast ocean, full of ideas
and questions to last a lifetime/
time...kids have plenty, but dont use it wisley/
Time is an endless clock, fingers ticking down to ure death sentance/
Don't think bout thier future, just think bout whats goin on/
thats why im makin this, poetic type song/
aint that long...but it explains a lot/
as i child i fought...to gain respect/
as Tupac said the E in "panther" stands for effect/
but kids these days dont care.../
My heart they tear apart/
dont appriciate rap, dont see that its art/

I remember being a child, reaching up to the sky with open hands/
Mad because it always slipped through my fingers...the annoying sands/
didnt appriciate life...but then i understood/
started to rap as much as a termite eats wood/
started to rhyme cuz i was lonely/
had no one but my one and only/
and i still love her to this day, and i never forget/
those moments we had together, i will never regret/
thinkin back my past, remember tod, never believed in god/
he always talked about "the tide"/
next thing i know, he commits suicide/
never went to bad things, never wanted to smoke pot/
next thing i know, for no reason i got shot/
thinkin back to my past, damn it was wild/
this is the story of me, my life as a child.....
:cool:

yo uppin for replies!

cmon you lazy people i comment on all of yours and waht do you do on mine? NOTHIN

UPPIN!!!

great flow i liked it alot keep right......
resp.

I like this one from you. The second part was good but the first part hit me harder.

"A childs mind is a vast ocean, full of ideas
and questions to last a lifetime/
time...kids have plenty, but dont use it wisley/
Time is an endless clock, fingers ticking down to ure death sentance/
Don't think bout thier future, just think bout whats goin on/"

That part right there was what I was like when I was younger, and still am today, occasionally. So I liked it a lot. Nice job.

lol i guess people can relate...thx you two uppin for replies

UPPIN!!!

this poem is hot!!

thx akira and if ya can check out my other stuff

uppin for replies imma head over to openmic for a bit

this is quite interesting but i have read several poems with this concept but i think this is good...

every other poem u drop is getting better and better

hope to read more!

thx shiz really appreciate it

uppin and
-OuT-

i liked it alot boo

aite thx uppin