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Bloomquist 05-10-03 01:18 AM

Glory Of God...
 
The Glory of god is like the sky nights at night/
god is always near you, not really far out of sight/
He is always there for you, in times of need and depression/
learn to go by his rules, of anti-sin and confession/
Many different ways in life, gods way is a must/
its the only way to heaven, live off the words "In God We Trust"/

God is Life, Love, Beuty and Joy, you will be punished in the afterlife if you abandon him like a toy/
God is there for you no-matter what, he is always reliable/
Go by his rules, love him, and live of the bible/
Live like a disciple, live with jesus and be kind/
Droppin religious lyrics as my brain and tounge unwind/

I am sorry God, for i truly sinned/
but i promise to believe in you in this chaotic wirlwind/
I still love you but i fell like im going insane/
lovin you with all my heart, why do i feel pain?/
My life is gettin blurry, its scary i swear/
starting to have second thoughts...are you really there?/
I always prayed to you, and the bible, I read/
Then why is this gun suddenly attached to my head?...............

Hey ya'll postin this for ya'll plz comment on it i really took my time and put a lot of emotion in it, hope i get some responds.

peace out.

Bloomquist 05-10-03 01:19 AM

uppin for votes yall

Eviley 05-10-03 01:27 AM

this was good i liked it alot

Bloomquist 05-10-03 01:28 AM

aite thx eviley im still trying to find ures lol

Bloomquist 05-10-03 01:29 AM

Uppin fo' votes yall!

Phantasia 05-10-03 08:43 PM

Well I think the ending was kind of shacky. Maybe if you were to do something more with that last line. Other than that ths is off the meat rack! I was fellin it

Bloomquist 05-10-03 10:29 PM

thx phantasia apprieciate ure comment.

uppin fo comments

Legendary 05-10-03 10:50 PM

This one was good. The ending, I'm not too sure about. I really liked that first paragraph though.

Bloomquist 05-11-03 04:28 PM

k thx legendary appricieate the comment

uppin fo comments

nunother 05-13-03 10:32 PM

It was nice read..so i liked it..keep doin what u do

Bloomquist 05-14-03 12:30 AM

aite keep hittin up them replies


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