just felt like spittin
 

i rip it up when i spit it up, yall can't stop me, so throw your hands up/
listen up, i weigh 145 and i spit ta strive,listen ta me we all gone die/
so be alive,we'll never live for ever but we all gone ride/
an till the day i die, i'ma spit ta strive,be betta than all yall till i take da dive/
so everybody realize, that no one is great, till you see wit your eyez, that their not fake/
an if in fact they are fo real, don't go holdin out ya hands like they got yo meal/
so stay real, an feel, what they got to say,you neva know,one day they might be great/
shit one day that might be yo fate, SO DON'T NEVA HATE!


holla yall

lol , ,, , , , drop was whack ,,,,,,,,,,,, plain and simple

Really reallly wack dawg

Up everything possible go to the tips link on this site and see if theres anything that can help you cus no offence you need it....

hey thx anywayz yall i'm alwayz takein critisizem...i got a new rap i just made i accually tried a lil harder check it out

Yeah man you really need to elevate your shit and round out the edges like I do. But keep doing your thing, you can obviously only get better.