just for the f of it
 

if you had a hot mom, i'd have to drop bombs //
stick her up, then spit it up on rap battles dot com //
but fuck it, i'm bored //
i feel like i'm stuck in the morgue //
i'm dead minded rhymin, you should give chuck an award //
and this devil's comin at me like i'm duckin a sword //
but i got god's back like i'm butt-fuckin the lord //
and i'm doin this for fun, i always charge freely //
if this was a battle, i won, while y'all play like marv leevy //
but i put that on your bill, while i'm in buffalo //
also had your girl on the pill, i had her pumpin bro //
i'll spit somethin slow, on mutherfuckin mother's day //
and while i'm fuckin your mother, you'll look the other way //
if this freestyle function was audio you'd hear burritos crunchin //
and cheetos munchin, cause i'm on that weed consumption //
i've been readin all about your ja rule and 50 posts //
whinin about the rule so much, it's like you hit 50 notes //
singin like him, and just sweatin 50 cent posts //
you must like rap that's syrupy sweet like french toast //
but hit me back without a snippy laugh //
or else y'all get hit up like dmx's skit on the mickey track

i need to get critiqued yo...that was just dumb stuff off the top of the head right now, i'm bored, and have insomnia or some shit - CAN'T SLEEP...

you need to elevate a lot dunny...this was just too simple...i know you said it was off the top but still it needs work...bars were ok its just the content of the bars that were disappointing namsayin...your vocab is too simple work on that as well...and if you dont mind return the favor of the drop i posted named Saba'a...keep elevating...wahid

werd, i'll check it out.

yer narc be right...its a lil simple,and the mom siht be played out...but yaknow just elevate,keep spitting an writing it dont take long to get the hang...well it can,but it shouldnt becasue you obviously have the interest...just keep spitting hat you feelin no doub tyoull get it....return the favour dun,i got two up here they long,but i mean they didnt take very long to write,off dome liek this was nahmena....

bismillah