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KRISSKASS 05-11-03 01:47 PM

Tenochitlan
 
A city of beauty in a land called Tenochitlan../

Were art was a form of an individual's contraband../

No drugs, alcohol, and war for land../

Just civilization living it enough so it could withstand../

The terror headed, like a prediction inbeded ../

Millions of my ancestors were beheaded../

Cut through the vertabrate from spaniards that still discriminate..

To this point of era and age../

Its to many words to explain../

The horror they left after the rain../

Blood still stains, the streets../

So far and millions of lightyears torn apart../

Masterfull work of art left behind to begin a new start../

Devastating stinch like a fat fuck layin a fart ../

The memory of a nation got carried away like a shopping cart../

No remorse for the actions they sought../

Culture of bullshit they brought../

Didn't make me think of it as a supreme god../

R-Cypher 05-11-03 01:50 PM

simple. It was alrite. I could say u couldve played with words betta but u spoke from the heart. But i wouldnt know shit im a noob.

If there is one country id love to go to its South America to c the old temples.

Bloomquist 05-11-03 05:05 PM

it was aite, kinda basic, try using ,multis in there smore and keep speaking the truth

-OuT-

Bash 05-11-03 09:45 PM

This drop was simple , ,, i think that u can do better ,,,, But it was nice


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