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Bloomquist 05-11-03 05:02 PM

Life Without A Mom...
 
I never had a mom, always was home alone, felt weak in the bone/
didnt have a mother to love, or to depend on and trust/
why i grew up bad, with rust and a gun to bust/
i grew up like a wild animal, killin niggas like hannibal/
wonderin if there is a god, and what my life in for/
Not havin a mom, literally makes ure heart sore/
then i tore, all the pain away, went astray and live in the streets/
nothin to do but make lyrics and beats/
Dont know waht a mom is, what the hell do they do?/
nothin for me and you, pretty soon imma get shot up too/
always wanted a mother who would be there for love at my side/
my father lied, couldnt take it so he ran and commited suicide/
this story is all true and thats wahts to sad/
had a dad,and some heats , grew up bad,in the streets/
this is the story from my prespective, life is like a living hell/
gettin shot up with a gun shell, goin down to hell, fallin in a dark hole, cuz my soul's a lump a coal/
aint got nothin to life for, hearts torn up and sore, livin on a dirt floor, now theres nothin to live for/
you heard me right by all the stuff i said, now i got a gat stuck pointed at my head.....

aite tell me what ya think bout this one, did it kinda quick along time ago uppin for replies on improvements

-OuT-

RythmicTendicies 05-11-03 05:19 PM

deep shit dawg, liked it a lot,

flowed well:
always wanted a mother who would be there for love at my side/
my father lied, couldnt take it so he ran and commited suicide/ - tight!!!

Bloomquist 05-11-03 05:55 PM

wow thx Ryth ill keep spittin man.

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Dinai 05-11-03 06:08 PM

yeah that was deep... I feel tha same thing about that... I liked good flow...

Bloomquist 05-11-03 06:26 PM

thx din ill keep it up and im feelin ya sig

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Dez 05-11-03 06:29 PM

you can tell it can from your heart. thats what its all about..

Bloomquist 05-11-03 06:35 PM

aite thx IRR for the comment

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K-RaZy 05-11-03 06:57 PM

i gotta admitt man, that deff. had some emotion. but i totally understood it considerin i aint got a dad..and my moms a complete bitch never there fo me...but all in all that was reall good

Bloomquist 05-11-03 07:17 PM

thx K i fell for ya

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SeVeR HeDDz 05-11-03 07:23 PM

This was probrably some deepness for those who never
had a mom, but i have mine, So you know i can't really say how
it would be without one.. but i'm pretty sure this is some deepness
For those who never had one.. keep uppin B!

Bloomquist 05-11-03 07:30 PM

Thx Man, wow im gettin good props for this.

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Bloomquist 05-11-03 08:14 PM

uppin for comments on this and my other open mic hit

Legendary 05-11-03 09:08 PM

Wow, this was really good. Like one of the other replies said, you can tell it's from your heart. Keep posting more like this.

Bloomquist 05-11-03 09:43 PM

aite will do legendary.

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