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Bloomquist 05-11-03 07:26 PM

Come And Get It
 
Drowning you in my rhymes of temptation/
racin, for a chance to be #1, now ures done, like my steak when its cooked good/
imma come and set fire ta ya whole hood/
attack you like a termite eats wood, so go home, thats waht you should/
make insane rhymes to make ya ear drums shatter, comin in you're life servin ya death upon a platter, and ya know my rhymes are phatter/

Strangle ya in a head lock and ya start to choke, put ya in a pan and fry ya like egg yolk/
Im a man of lyrics, ure jsut a baby boy, just messin around cuz ure a helpless toy/
Askin you like verizon calls "Can you hear me now?", ure wondering why my rhymes so ill, asking ureself "How?"/

Out rappin while you reading my rhymes like its a fairy tale, ya rhymes are weak, sold em for 2$ at a garage sale/
hopefully now you see ya cant beet me, the illest emcee this side of the mississippi, make ya cry until ya eyes bleed....

aite ya'll made this for ya hope ya'll like it.

uppin for comments on waht ya like and waht i can improve on

-OuT-

Bloomquist 05-11-03 07:34 PM

uppin for votes on this and check out my other joint too yall

-OuT-

Bloomquist 05-11-03 08:12 PM

cmon ya'll post on this uppin

caspah 05-11-03 08:46 PM

yo man had an aiight flow i guess but ur punches were WEAK like mad weak, u gotta set it up, then throw tha big punch ya know
ur best one was prob tha mississippi one cuz it flowed good through it but u still didnt set up any of ur punchs first

return favour and crit my mothers day drop

Bloomquist 05-11-03 08:53 PM

aite thx caspah ill do that check out my other spit.

uppin


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