A Confused State of Mind
 

i sit and look up at the cold night sky/
i wonder today, how many did die?/
i feel for those who lost, yet i look upon them/
i try to see clear/ but all i see is the color red/
for times i wish i could just lift my own spirit/
when i talk to god, once i wish he would hear it/
someties i wish i could sore with the birds/
and fly with the planes/
somtimes i wish i could levitate/
off the soil of this strange planet called earth/
no point, im still confused/
since concieved 3 months early at birth/
yet like the night sky, everything is dark and lost/
im liven different now/
so im gonna pay the cost/

Nice Shit man. It was really deep. It made you think... Elevate

Re: A Confused State of Mind
 

these lines are great....props for awesome choice of words....
i liked it cuz some how it makes u feel that u dont understand something but as u analyze it very carefully...its getting better and clearer as time pass..





another lines that made u just sit back and think about life...



over all nice concept...

hopin to see more.........

thx for the insight ill make some more n pos them up..1

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