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MDB 05-12-03 03:19 AM

I'm Still Here(no bad feelings)
 
I aint never going nowhere/
to get these problems off my head i dont care/
just dont stare/
and dont u dare diss me when im just tryin to come up/
trying to start small an then blow up/
i aint shrinkin for no one clubs scared to book me/
dont shut me down and please dont call me a rookie/
what can i do to change the negative vibes/
i'm breakin in hives and tryin to find places to hide/
take my self from this earth i just might committ a death sentence/
its like being in court not knowin ur next sentence/
til the day i stop imagining myself/
not worried bout money when my first album leaves the shelf/
i'm tryin hard and the best i can do/
if its elementary at least i graduated from preschool/
let me be me and stay out of my buisness/
i wanna murder rhymes and leave no room for a witness/
being downgraded it feels like a kick in the head/
and cant get up cause all im seein is red/
grading my lyrics like professor's what impossible methods/
i cant seem to do things right am i losing my edges/
im basin my strentgh on weaknesses forgotten the meanin of rap/
cause im thinkin bout my house on cribs when i get put on the map/
i feel like i'm caged in no matter where im rappin/
i could get crowds jumpin to the beat an gettem stumpin they feet/
like they was part of a frat party enough to call it a fleet/
checkin for anything that could be a positive topic/
im stayin focus on what im writin wit out focus i aint rockin it/
sounds like im rappin through tooth picks it aint soundin like shit/
i come out wit what i come wit it keeps me apart/
from what others see outside me and tares me apart/
i have no knowledge of college so my grammar be off/
so yall pissed off at me for coming out soft/
well im tellin a story so true it can hail to mary/
take the holy bible in my hand make it sound imaginary/
poetry's deep and i feel yall feelin me right now/
i may not spit my best at all times but what i write is what i write down/

Kosta 05-12-03 04:50 AM

umm....
hmm....
work on flow. meaning.
vocab. meta°s. lol. umm.
disregard all that. just
work on everything.
and you will get better.
thats what i do. work on
everything.




a circle is perfect...
the world isnt round...

tRiLL 05-12-03 08:52 AM

wack..........sand u shouldnt be so nice........work one everything......take a month off ur life go to soem deserted island....and try n elivate......lol

MDB 05-12-03 11:35 AM

U wanna battle Trill

*~*£-DuB*~* 05-12-03 11:42 AM

yo i guess it was str8... i have seen better tho... if i were u i would boost my vocab and please work on your flow, word up...


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