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Narcicyst 05-12-03 06:59 AM

Just Tryin To Confuse You
 
his eyes lay protuded from its sockets/
as a carcass would hang off a decayin vine tree/
a visionary slave, shackled by his eyesight/
blinded by his extended existense, his soul spew outta his pupil/
mutilated and drilled into/
as if the opening was the door out of his cell/
the prison of his flesh/
half, man laughter of wrath/
flags above, wrapped around his castle/
disaster embattled this master pharoah/
old age third millenium peak/
where slaves behave from fear of being slained/
from betrayal, wain your teachings, in vain descent of worth against the grain/
tossed loss was the gain, flows into his industrial capularies/
proletriat majesty rust improved taps of berries/
posionous wine of mind ointment/
lotion of his juice produces motionless emotional quotients/
divisions of one, seeds run from slaughter/
protect daughters and sons, from collared chains/
links into my Earth brain, knees bent into submission/
i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow flush my system out/
pumps blood thats brown, stained and drowned in pain/
in shrouds i reign, mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected/
infected by retrospective, collective thoughts set forth defective/
these self explanatory metric patterns, encased in imbalance/
sinful waste ego schitzophrenic rant challenge/
mind swollen this cavity filled with thoughts a battered past/
shattered glass reflection of his matter/
he who is created by this project rods, neck prod, pet of my rotten mesh organs/
disorganized ordinance of subordinate order of soldiers tied to my borders....

FaTaL ErRoR 05-12-03 07:19 AM

this is a very tight drop... i was definatly feeling this...


return the love homie... i posted a open mic aswel that is getting slepted on

Atetrack define' 05-12-03 07:40 AM

disorganized ordinance of subordinate order of soldiers tied to my borders....


^^ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...nice nice nice line!
you prolly confused half these cats already with just the title,its like that dun...nice drop...

got em confused like what the fuck is the Roolin on Twenties on my Chromed out Scooter gang With Super Soakers...only us know the answer ahhah...

bismillah

Narcicyst 05-12-03 07:46 AM

shukran for the comments...and no doubt Ate i represent that shit like fertilizer salesmen namsayin....they just afraid of a panty raid namsayin...i dont know they always sleep in here anyways so i dont think anyones gonna read it....good looking out...wahid

Narcicyst 05-13-03 04:30 AM

uppin..

deacon 05-13-03 05:00 AM

Very nice piece man, its rare to find someone with a similar approach to writing as me. Much love and respect

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Narcicyst 05-13-03 05:05 AM

thanks homie...just decided to go all abstarct and complex on they asses namsayin...anyways good looking out holmes...wahid

Atetrack define' 05-13-03 06:41 AM

blah to sleepin cats,on this cats drops and mines,blah to yall...

Narcicyst 05-13-03 07:25 AM

yah dawg blah and wet drawls namsayin...quit sleepin...uppin

Narcicyst 05-13-03 08:49 AM

why do people sleep onme everytime i drop some shit thats complex??????

Atetrack define' 05-13-03 08:59 AM

coz they neanderthals dun...this shit is too much like a pizza box,cats gotta think how to get it open...

Narcicyst 05-13-03 09:01 AM

^^lol@similie...word dunny they always be sleepin on us in here...you know what from now on i aint never gonna post in open mic again...

Atetrack define' 05-13-03 09:03 AM

sounds like a plan....ahhaha,i can never get the damn pizza box open i swear,its prolly coz i dont eat pizza but once a year on average nahmean...its like a rubix cube with food in it,and when you hungry you just as likley to go at the shit with a chainsaw...shits crazy....

Narcicyst 05-13-03 09:06 AM

word dunny...but its all though just pull up on your chromed out scooter sittin on 20s by the pizza place and you know what to do next namsayin...fuckin people makin boxes hard to open and shit with they ignorant asses

Atetrack define' 05-13-03 09:07 AM

i know!we need to put a stop to all this box making nahmean...its like they makin so many boxes the shits reflectin they heads an minds and the cats trapped...this shit with sleeping...its just the fault of pizza boxes,shits a damn conspiracy...


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