Iraq
 

U-S-A, sends soldiers to war wit a push,
This is makin me question George W. Bush,
Fullscale invasion,
then he gonna go to Asian land,
North Korea, China, Than Japan,
Man, i jus don't, understand,
Germany called this guy the reborn Adolf,
People on sum US nuts, n they need to Get-Off,
This is tha Spinoff,
We droppin napalm and Nukes,
Blastin em wit tank shells,
Need tah put up they dukes,
Military Intellegence, Victims to War Crimes,
Frontlines,
Soldiers blown tah bits steppin on landmines,
They Cant Find,
The other soldiers MIA's,
Bad enuff in LA, gettin hit wit AK's,
700 Days, how long is this gone last,
Men comin back DEAD, or in Full Body Casts,
Causin Alliances now, (pause) wit distant nations,
People considerin Saddum to be best of Patrons,
Invasions,
Once more, in Europe from Iraq,
Britain calls us up, cuz they kno that we got they back,
Fullscale attack,
Get em wit a ratta-tat-tat-tat,
Thinkin we won, until the Terrorist strike back,
Bush dont like that,
So now we goin back to war,
Once more,
The United States tryin to settle the score,
What for,
Dunno, but we invade European Shore,
Nations fall due to Treason, For no good reason,
To ignorant to realize that Satan is who they pleasin,
Warheads dropped on all 7 continents,
Destruction of all, historical monuments,
This is Apocolypse,
So yo, we need to stop it now,
Tell George that he gotta end the war sumhow...
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feedback people...

it was aiight dub,the vocab was simple adn you go tyour point across,but still you need to keep writing and elevating coz theres heaps of room fo rimprovent no doubt,im liking wha tyou havet o say but your style is mad simple,amybe you like it like that nad thats your own right,but still i thought it came a bit weaker then what it could have been,and alot of the lines lost hte flow,but then again i dont know wha tyou spit like,this migh tbe perfect or you nahmean,thats the problem with writtens you cant tell,but i enjoyed readin git no doubt dub,just keep writng an elevatin and youll get it ,youogto some positiv esitin your head with this drop...

bismillah

peep my shi tsometime,zions and my quick verse aiight

Um...isn't this a bit late?

haha forsure

i kno, every keystyle i have posted here is old, and about the flow, this is another audio, it sounds hot as hell, the flow is perfect on the track, im gonna upload all of those soon as well, but till then bere wit me yo...

lol@rat ta ta ta ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, this shit was weak , i didnt like it , , , no Art of Text

...right...feedback...