Just some thoughts
 

All these wack azz niggaz b gettin so supastitious/
thas why LiL B always gettin so vicious/
I leave em wit stitches/
take they bitches and steal they riches/
leavin their dead, decapitated body parts in ditches/
sometimes I shoot niggaz just for the fun/
but when i'm really pissed i don't use a gun/
i just kill em wit my bare hands/
thas cuz i'm a grown man/
who will snap ur fuckin neck faster than a ceiling fan/
Think i'll shoot?/
don't think twice/
i'll leave you feelin dumb like you just rolled the wrong dice.

i was just spittin off the top of my head so rate it if ya want to

wack.... no hate just truth... try to write something nice... take time... elevate... keep writting

no one asked a lil puss like you

your just a lil poetic bitch peace

expand your vocabulary. pick up a thesaurus. read a newspaper. inject some metaphors and clever word play and your lines will flow at least 15 times better.

thanx that comment was better than meta 5's shyt, said it was wack...... please

thanx that comment was better than meta 5's shyt, said it was wack...... please

yo if anyone thinks i should write some not so violent let me know i'll take it into consideration

wasn't "whack" but could use some more depth.....

i try not to rhyme about violence, its too easy and unless youare really some ghetto thug, (in which case you wouldn't be posting online), you just come off more humorous than threatening....

oh well, thats my humble opinion, I try to rhyme more positive.....

check my stuff, lemme know if ya follow...

peace.