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Accelerate 05-12-03 03:49 PM

Anybody(don't sleep on this)
 
Anybody can be a rapper
just get a hot beat,make up rhymes and flow/
Anybody can be a hustler
just get some drugs and make that dough/
Anybody can be a gangster
just get a gun and shoot niggas in the head/
Anybody can be a pimp
just get them girls and take them to the bed/
Anybody can be a leader
just take a crowd and lead for some cause/
Anybody can be perfect
just follow the Bible in live with no flaws/


But can anybody be a rapper?
Do you have the flow, and the vibe, the words to make a real song?/
But can anybody be a hustler?
Do you got the smarts to run and hide whenever undercover 5-0 comes?/
But can anybody be a gangster?
Were you born like that , that you gotta rep your hood, till your head get cracked?/
But can anybody be a pimp?
Too have the looks and feel of good sex, have fights over 5 girls and take em all back?/
But can anybody be a leader?
Were they thosen few to lead millions through all the hardest shit?
And can anybody be perfect?
Life is too long to live perfect, but life is too short to not try, and nobody is perfect ,because its too easy to sin/

In life you come to a real conclusion/
cuz anybody can be anything, but atleast throughout it they did shit/

Accelerate 05-12-03 04:03 PM

uppin for some comments yooo

Trip Marxx 05-12-03 04:04 PM

This piece is ok..........flow was off at points....an the vocab definitly needs some work...add some more in there....but you somewhat got your point across seems like......not hatin....just keep writin and droppin more...

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BlUnT-MC 05-12-03 04:19 PM

you need alot of work.. I like the concept, but the flow was way off.. some nice points there, keep elevatin'..

RythmicTendicies 05-12-03 04:27 PM

yeah, work needed defiently, but you'll get there :)

keep elevatin'

Bash 05-12-03 06:56 PM

I cant understand ,,,, sometimes he spitz Ill and sometimes he spitz whack


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