~Tear Drop 4 our Brotherz & Sisterz~ pme
 

~Lost~WUnS~
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Tear drops from my eye...
Hating my ways of livin with lies...
Feelin blind, basically due to acting blind...
Fallin behind, they high jacked my mind...
Not speakin for my own,
but shoutin out for my kind...
No more lies, can't waite 4da artificial price...
Ran from struggle~
Jus' 2make it to a bigger struggle...
Livin in a pathetic hustle...
9to5...no good reason of stayin alive~
Whats a mans life, when he can't protect his->
kids and Wife?
Ambush and rush in any house,
They have me paraniod, but fearless...
is why I speak this, 4u to hear this~
Read this--->PME.
PeaceMiddleEast...
In need of unity 2gain da depth of purity...
Understandment 2notice da realness of reality...
Tear Drops For my Brothers and Sister~
Bloody bodies fillin pain in my brain,
I get the full picture...
In or 4 PME, we need 2be there as personal
Rangers~
Underground our personal anger~
And think of what comes after,
Focus wise dont be a stranger~
This is happening to you...
While you battle yourself~
Brothers and sisters lose their lifes~
While you worry about ya' wealth~
Brothers and sister die from lack of
good health~
While-I could go on for a while
and get wild, but ama stop by sayin_
PME...Tear Drop For Our Brothers & Sisterz...
May Allah Guides us All...

No doubt my brother...

keep spreading the deen...

we're all in the belly of the beast...

the imagery in this was on a another level...

illnes fam....illness

peace
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Yeah, aki, that was a powerful spit...man our brothers and sisters dying for nothing...May Allah give us the promised victory soon...keep waking up the people....peace

MAsha ALLAH my fellow brothas Thnx for the advice and apreciate the feedback

UPPPUN

what the fuck is an allah?

and the poem was perfection

vocab, eh, here and there it had its dry spots, but overall

you cant argue with the message

aand u cant argue with me, good shit

Allah is like how the moslems call their GOd.....i think...

this is was a nice piece....lots of emotions....i liked it...
a masterpiece by another talented poet *sigh*...

keep em droppin!

Ay what up folk...dis shit was tight..damn nice emotion ..I'm feelin ya.

LOL SCareface .....man Allah=God feel me

Shiznit and Poeticblue thnx for the comments i apreciate it