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TamairaSanders 05-12-03 07:40 PM

my dream boy for the fellas
 
romeo he's not enough i need somebody who's tuff/i need a thug boy who love to ride and stick by my side/i don't want no wanksta/ no want to be gansta just cause he want to be famous/i want a real boy/ a trill boy one who brings me real joy/babyboy i don't want the world/ no dimonds,no pearls/ just remember i'm yo girl/don't want to play no childish games/i want to twerk that thang/don't want no boy who is lame/a boy who's there when i'm in pain/if i'm hurt he'll fill the same/i know he can't be there all the time/ but let our hearts combind/i don't care if you did a crime/ or even on the grind/babyboy we 'll still shine/i need a boy who love to rhyme/ a boy that i can call all mine/who love to roll up them pines/and one that knows he's fine/that was the last line i'm out 1

Sureal 05-12-03 08:00 PM

tamaire our coming uo babe , check out warlords femcee divison drop darkhistory qa vers and see if ya can make that shit

NuclearConcepts 05-12-03 08:06 PM

Thats definitly me.

..same age too

Bash 05-12-03 08:10 PM

Sanders checkout out B.R.E cause we're lookin for an Ill femcee like you

TamairaSanders 05-12-03 08:18 PM

nuclear concepts you think you can really stick with me because i like them thugish

Maven 05-12-03 08:25 PM

nice verse, but you need to organise your lines. with it written like this, it's difficult to read, takes away from the piece. You had a good flow, as far as I could see, but you need to add wordplay and multis for it to be seriously dope.
the guy you're lookin for doesn't exist babe, cuz men are dumb. sorry to tell you, but we are. with that said, keep lookin for him.
Nice drop,check out my verses(the links are in my sig)
Peace

NuclearConcepts 05-12-03 08:25 PM

I'm as thuggish as they come.

TamairaSanders 05-12-03 08:37 PM

where do i try out B.R.E

NuclearConcepts 05-12-03 08:38 PM

Do.. you.. have any pictures?

TamairaSanders 05-12-03 08:39 PM

you really think you're thugish spit a flo

Bash 05-12-03 08:40 PM

Sanders i send u a message ,, , peep it

TamairaSanders 05-12-03 08:43 PM

no

TamairaSanders 05-12-03 08:43 PM

o.k i will check the message out

Bash 05-12-03 08:44 PM

iight babe

NuclearConcepts 05-12-03 08:44 PM

Beech wanna die? I smother ya crew til ya jugular's blue
Stompin ya bitch and stomp ya mother to boot.
Chuggin a brew, but fuck droppin that acid
I'm too busy droppin a faggot like a boxer is savage
Obnoxious at rappin, which hoochie would suck?
My dick's properly cooked and got these chicken's juicy as fuck
You better check yaself, I'm prep as hell
But still gangstaaaaa... leavin ya chest impaled.
and still spank ya.


THUGGISH


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