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ALan ALba 05-12-03 08:38 PM

Car crash...rate it
 
Dynamic Speed Stops When I Yield At Green
The Curb Bending Like Kamu Sutra when the street Im Drifting
Braking With my RIght Foot Wheel shifting
BLame God For the Weather Cause the Wheels were SPinning
Due to My Weight THe Car was Tipping
Passenger SIde hit the ground, Paint CHipping
IN this MOtion Of Fear Was an Impulse of Screaming
If before I DIdnt Have HOt Flashes LIke MOthers In Pregnancy
Sparked Memory Blanks of WHite in my eye beams
Whether Be The LIght hitting THe Raining Street
OR My Cranium Hitting The Ceiling
WHiplash Causing Sleep Unconsciously.
Saw when I was
1.Held 2.Carried 3.Walking 4.Learning
Funny BeCause the Paramedics had me
1.Held
2.Carried
3.Walking
4.Learning
Rehabilitating Physically and Psycho-Analyzing me
Back to the beginning Previews 30 minutes Ticket Receiving
Looking at a Magazine ISsue
XXL cover with IRV GOTTI AND JA RULE
Thinking about my answer to a Movie To PReview.

ALan ALba 05-12-03 11:19 PM

uppin

tRiLL 05-12-03 11:36 PM

The Curb Bending Like Kamu Sutra when the street Im Drifting naa that line was pretty weak
If before I DIdnt Have HOt Flashes LIke MOthers In Pregnancy weak..........na that piece was overall weak..the vocab was pahtetic....it was ok for a newbie post u could have made it better........keep elivating

Bash 05-12-03 11:38 PM

Trill checkout my boy's drop , ,,,,, B.R.E. presents: "Soldier's dont cry"

ALan ALba 05-13-03 12:06 AM

aight

ALan ALba 05-13-03 12:20 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Bash
Trill checkout my boy's drop , ,,,,, B.R.E. presents: "Soldier's dont cry"


oh yeah.................I might be a newbie partner, that doesn't give you any reason to step in my post and disrepect dicksnot, like you the honor....suggest you get out of that arrogant state of mind cause that'll be your downfall.

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