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Lost Relic...The Battlefield.

I was sittin in my room bored as fuck.
So, I decided to make a lil written.
Peep.
G H O S T.

-RELEASIN LYRICS LIKE RAIN BY SPITTIN SPIRTUAL CHAINS TO ADD SOULS TO MY COLLECTION OF REIGN.
-BEEN ON EARTH SINCE THA FIRST LIFE, I WAS THA SERPENT THAT GAVE PERMISSION TO EVE TO EAT THA FRUIT FOR THA WORST SPITE.
-CATASTROPHE HAPPENING VASTLY, THEN CAIN KILLED ABEL, THAT BASTARD, I SENT HIM TO HELL TO MEET HIS NEW GHASTLY MASTER.
-RAPTURE SPECIMENS FOR A LIVING, I ROAM THROUGH DARKNESS TRANSPARENT, GIVING MY UTMOST GRATITUDE BY ADVANCED MIC SPITTIN.

)(He woke up at the sound of a gun shot. He was in a cot surrounded by other soldiers. He remembered he was enlisted in the army. A alarm sounded as everyone awakened and started getting ready. He climbed out of the cot and went to the bathroom, Looking in the mirror. He began to freestyle.)(

-WAR IS IMPREGNABLE, A FORTRESS OF INDIGENOUS EVIL...WEAPONS THAT'S LETHAL, RELEASIN SOULS TO HEAVEN AND HELL, I SEE THROUGH OPERATIONS...PROPHECIZE CONTEMPLATIONS, MY NAME IS SCRIPTED...HIEROGLYPHED ON SOLIDS BECOMING STONE AGE ART WHEN TIME HAS SHIFTED...ON THE BATTLEFIELD, A WHOLE DIFFERENT SCENARIO...CAMOFLAUGED SPIES TO CARRY ON DEATH ACTS LIKE KAMIKAZE-TYPE DRONES...BULLETS WHISPERIN FOR YOUR LIFE, SPRINTIN PAST HEADS...YOU STRIVE TO SURVIVE THA STRIFE, SOON OR LATER YOU'RE GONNA BE DEAD...DON'T GRIEVE BUT GREET THA REAPER WITH OPEN ARMS...CAUSE YOUR COURAGEOUS DEEDS, GOOD OR BAD, STILL WILL STAND STRONG.

Yeah that was dope
i liked your grim style, very mystical.

I couldnt read this.........i dont like tha color dawg.............blue.......it blinded me , ,, anywayz dawg , , this drop was Tight

haha that was a nice drop...yo i agree with Bash the blue thing wasnt that good of an idea....some of the lines i found hard to rhyme but like i said the piece was dope...the vocab was mad, the concept was good flow was a bit off in some places.............keep postin

Dope.
RELEASIN LYRICS LIKE RAIN BY SPITTIN SPIRTUAL CHAINS TO ADD SOULS TO MY COLLECTION OF REIGN.
-BEEN ON EARTH SINCE THA FIRST LIFE, I WAS THA SERPENT THAT GAVE PERMISSION TO EVE TO EAT THA FRUIT FOR THA WORST SPITE.
-CATASTROPHE HAPPENING VASTLY, THEN CAIN KILLED ABEL, THAT BASTARD, I SENT HIM TO HELL TO MEET HIS NEW GHASTLY MASTER.
-RAPTURE SPECIMENS FOR A LIVING, I ROAM THROUGH DARKNESS TRANSPARENT, GIVING MY UTMOST GRATITUDE BY ADVANCED MIC SPITTIN.

That was dope and had to be my favorite bit. nice mystical style

yer i liked it shadow...where you been lately?aint seen no drops in here for ages....maybe i missed em or soemhting....but yeah i liked this,some of the rhymes didnt seem to work but,but i stillliked the idea of the cat gettin up in the middle of a war and jsut freestylign ahhaha...nice...
bismillah

Good lookin.
Thanks for the replies.
Up'

This piece was ok, You've done better, Annoying Blue characters I agree with everyone else but its your theme so whatever, Come harder

yea i really wasn't feelin this piece...i think it coulda been longer...and i think the whole "dark" style of it was kinda poorly written..and the color sucked....but this is def constructive critiscism

maaan this was evILL..lol..

no doubt..feelin ya style homes..

Bah..Thanks for the replies.
G H O S T.