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Rise 05-12-03 10:43 PM

.:For Femcees:.
 
To the Queens Of RB, and HipHop


She has her Heart On her Mind, & On the side:.
she Hopes to Fly, but even on my back shes not ON the Rise:.
becuase you should see clear with Open eyes, but her Eyes are Wide & Blind:.
Line for Line, she goes for it Time after Time, but so Confined:.

She Must Come out the Box, Out of Shock:.
Be inavative, to be On the Top:.
She's got talent, but Shes On the rocks, On the Chopping Block, Every Post she Drops:.

Steady trying to be, the next Queen Bee, Next Foxy, Next Evie E:.
But Femcee..do one thing, look in the mirror & say "I am Me":.
Then when you succeed, Props will be, all for the, instead of Eve, for showing you how to procced, in this leauge:.

Originality

Intelligents

but keep your female personna:.
dont forget who you are, and you will shorely get were you wanna:.


Yall know Rise Love the ladies...lol

Rise

DaGyrlRemarqabL 05-12-03 11:22 PM

Awe. Nice piece, great msg. Feelin that. Stay up Rise. Nice writez.

Rise 05-13-03 09:23 AM

Thanx^^^For Tha Love ....This drop is Fo tha Femcees...

shiznit 05-13-03 11:15 AM

I think its really good....The message of the poem came hard and easily appreciate by the readers...

*sooner or later femcees will rule the hip hop world..muhahahaha* <------------- just playin!..:)

but anyways...glad u appreciate femcees...

much respect..

hopin to read more...

TamairaSanders 05-13-03 07:11 PM

i really loved that keep doin what you do

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 05-14-03 08:59 PM

This was awesome drop babyboi,
diggin it,

much props!!!

Pz xXx


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