freestyle, well not really-keystyle
 

As faggats catch dicks like catchers to a ball pitch in a mit
I twist my body around on a stage like the helix

Forget the last line, cause that was supplied
like pablo esco, in every nas line
Made to be repeated on beat,
like a tennis racket hitting a tennis ball from a wall at three feet
Now who wants to give a shoutot to me?
Probably stupid niggas like Jorge bush who waves at stevie

New verse, new realization most emcees curse
by the pronounciation brought like voodoo from eves bayou
video bootlegged from you because you never had fun with anything magical the factual opinion is a contradiction

Forget about a memory
because basically when your a weed head like me
your bound to forget anything
especially if it pertains to respect from anyone in your family
cause basically I inspecktah the deck
like the one who laced CREAM
GZa did the chorus,
hes a genius emcee
legend of the liquid sword
contradiction of what he represents to me
something was missing
like a song that was good on a canibus cd
My friend says the one when he talks about when hes pregnant
is cool.
But unlike clowns who wear government clothes i aint a fool
Those last two lines were wack as shit, a thesis lacked from this
seems like something Bash would call JUST FUCKIN PATHETIC.

peace.

up

that was weak.....u just tried to rhyme lines....u should actaully try n rhyme about a topic.........n i dont think there's any freestylin and or keystyling allowed on Open Mic

SHit is weak.
Straight up man.

NEXT

however, the first 2 lines about the DOUBLE helix would have been phat if he put duoble to even his sylables