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DLiTe Vs. DeadPool
10-15 bars
. no d/r, hate ,crew, or unexplained votes . due by tomorow night . good luck;) |
I ll hit this when both spit hit mine up in the meantime http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46425
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Yo, DLITE u forgot ta poll vote in my battle wit white:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46425 -thanks... |
I leave your pride mutilated- small but im known to turn men to boys/
Im more irritated with you-than a trucker with hemroids!/ My cells have been raided and mutated by the bass line/ Even the sun backs down- it knows its my time to shine/ Mention my name on this earth and feel my presence/ I write a rhyme on your birthday and give it as a present!/ I look at you like a chef looks at chicken/ Cause I can “cook” you with many “styles” in or out of the kitchen/ [Switches style for Finisher] A hard hitter lyrical venom spitter-Watch as my words make his spine creak and bend-give him nightmares like my name was dream weaver/ At half time this kids losing they call him a quitter- went in the game as a "tight end" hes leaving a "wide receiver"!:eek: / (he had a “tight end”-closed ass- until he got fucked in it and now hes taking dicks in it aka a “wide receiver”-open ass-) |
Hey yo im Dlited, that you think you the only one standin//
I'll cut you up and shoot your parts, back and forth in the grand canyon// I be the one to break through your barrier// A bomb carrier, blow straight threw your text bitch now who look scarier/// you ran into the wrong one, I'm the son of a gun// You target practice, I'ma hit you off for fun// You out of fashion, on top of that you got me laughin// Like a gun toter up against an assassin// It's like that, born with the strength to strike back// Full contact better wear your hardhat in combat// Word up, get yourself hurt up, meanin fast// The first one that steps be the first one I click-click-blast// You 0-2 plus one from deadpool, // you don't need an education cause you just got schooled// quick |
Mane dlites ending line ripped your whole verse.
Punch Quality:Dlite Punch Quanitity:Tie Flow:Dlite Creativity: Dlite Overall:Dlite Not too good of a battle, nothin outstanding. 21 |
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Dlite's verse was aight.he only had one decent punchline.DeadPool's verse wasnt that much better either but he did have a few more stronger punches
vote-DeadPool UnO PS....Return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46559 |
uppin for some votes
remember to POLL VOTE TOO if you hit this ill hit up yours~!! ^^^^^^^uppppppppin^^^^^^^^ |
if dlites verse was a little longer he may have won but deadpool took it]
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well, both verses wus kinda weak, but i liked D's punchlines better, ive seen better DLITE, (poll vote}
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vote up people i need to get more vote in
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my vote is goin to deadpool dlite that chicken line was tight and thats it. deadpool's punches hit harder to me, hey do me a favor and vote on my battle with evil_solo (one more needed) and dubmaster( just got started) -1-
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DLite had a slacked verse for the whole thing..punches were mad elementary.. his finisher KILLED tho... so I'm voting for DLite
return the favour http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=46865 |
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