Need some feedback on new tracks
 

let me know what you think

www.soundclick.com/illegalrecords941

downlaod "illegal" first

ok first no matter da beat is annoyin your flow is ok kind of basic like u wanna rap fast but aint got da hang of it lyrics are ok overall nice track ill give it 3 of 5 but i wouldnt listen to it normally maybe every now and den

second track
beat is better but sounds generic same as first track lyrics are nice u got skill u need to work on your presence a lil bit more tho id listen to dis one more i like it da beat is got me and your flow on dis one is better hook is ok keep it up kid nice drops peep my shit holla

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yo i enjoyed the chorus on Illegal, thats sumtin i could bump in tha car yo... i liked it... the lyrics were nice 2..

the demo will be cmpletely done in like 2 weeks, ill keep yall posted

the beat was pretty good on illegal. good delivery and sense of rhythm. not exactly an original topic but the lyrics were pretty tight, the hook was pretty good as well.

keep posting.

holla