My Hypocrisy---> beyond beliefs
 

a holy war's being fought over seas.//
Iraqis and americans, muslims versus christianity.//
shit, that's what it has to be...//
where's the terrorists bush is tryin' to insist exist.//
I havn't seen one attack since the anthtrax after september 11th hit.//
this epidemic of panic driven hate is the 'cause of the contraversy that's up for debate.//
which in turn is 'causing propeganda to emerge in manipulative way's;//
try'n to change our beliefs, that's a hypocrisy to me.//
or could it possibly be; that my concience is being decieved by all this constant gossip that I'm seein'...//
hearing, my ears open so I absorb and soon fear no-one.//
bin-laden, his cereer's broken, sedamm'n'them;
they dissapeared like last year's hopes of violence being over.//
you can't silence what's already spoken, the damage is already done.//
the war's done, but still no weapons of mass destruction, just some guns.//
bush.. man, you really fucked-'em up.//
for what tho, nuthin'..
I ain't see a point except for maybe your enjoyment.//
deployin' troops spread over the soil and sand like Iraq's the rash and special-forces the ointment.//
or is it for the oil bins,
barrels, and pumping stations.//
you just want to take them for all they got,
replenish your lack of natural stock.//
a new re-source of your resourses,
and of course this means ya ain't give no chance for a plea-bargain.//
all this war was to you was the green margin
on a spread sheet that reads "yearly budget".//
so you closed your eyes and pointed at a map,
"here's the target."//
"Iraq.. they can't defend from our attack,
look at the gulf war, we killed 'em in that."//
"fuck sedamm, I'm-a follow in the foot steps of my dad".//

this had a nice topic, not a new one, but you did it well. You need to work on flow because you lost me more than once, and your syllables were way off.

so you closed your eyes and pointed at a map,
"here's the target."//

dope line. I couldn't see how trying to change the religion was hypocritical, I can see how it's wrong, but hypocracy doesn't seem to fit the action.
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nah.. hypocrisy is a false belief.. bush wants us to believe it's a war over terrorists, but really it's for oil and power... and the flow part of your comment is wrong too.. listen to wu-tang "4th chamber" instrumental and you'll get the flow.. I write to beats, so it's not really a smooth flow unless it's to that or a similar beat..

uppin' you hating sleepers...

I hate this.. I reply to everybody's shit and I get fuckin' slept on.. FUCK YOU

This was cool..
had an important message..

keep droppin the knowlegde bro..

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This shit was Whack........Lol , ,juss playin dawg ,,,,,,,,, this was Tight......Like saladin said......it had an important message , , ,, , , , Ill drop dawg , ,, keep spittin

thx 4 replies... I be sure to return tha favour

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Shit... niggas do be sleepin' out this joint. You reply to their shit, and they sleep on yours. Damn, it's all good kid. They ain't know what they missin'. This verse is hot though, good topic. Spittin' some knowledge.

that was tight man. i dug it. i wrote one that starts off about the war, but it has more to do with the collapse of society. read it - its called the world is flat and no one is responding to that one either. but i felt the flow on yours and i pretty much agree with all of it too.

You said it all in this one line:

all this war was to you was the green margin

it was the cake and tha rest was the icin' peace

nice.. I liked that comment the best so far...