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Chrit vs. lilsmokey
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10 Lines min – 30 lines max Check in: Thursday Verses by: Saturday Voting is all done by poll now! Good Luck |
aight.......................
checkin in now.......................... droppin tomorrow no-show or not |
checkin in
lets do this.............................................. ..... .................................................. ..................... |
Aight look
here it comes.... droppin pry just 20 match it 5-2 record this herb wants to be taken seriously even though he lacks clout/ After this battle I'll recycle ya own line, "You just got knocked the fuck out!!"/ Five and two and the kid thinks he belongs with the elite/ Too bad he still kicks played lines about losing ankles and his own de-feets/ Sorry kiddo but all your lines are elementary to me/ And all you'll gain from this, is a plot in the cemetary ya see/ Another prepubesent bitch bout to be tought the lessons of life/ Only three things for sure in life, death, taxes and your merking in this fight/ Lilsmokey went to weed college, got a phd in herbology/ Man you aint even droped and I'm still embarassed, you owe me an apology/ Reppin a crew that Never Bring Serious Lines which rings true in your battle stats/ You need a transfusion of lyrics kid.... quick ready Chrits blood asap for this transfer of talent/ Checked you wins for real emcces.... that query came up empty/ 7 battles and nothing quotable... your verses cause error 203... Invalid Entry/ Kid entered this league in hope of weight class domination/ May soon do so but a class for herbs has him patiently waiting/ Like a rich man in South Central this fool better walk cautious/ And keep ya mouth shut cause that bullshit you speak has us all nautious/ My advice for this kid is to no-show and I'll explain what that lesson is all about/ You see its better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to open you mouth and remove all doubt/ edited for spelling errors damned keystyles |
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check it............ you say only three things for sure- but you named four / dumb ass-- you should've edited ya verse some more / its not CHRIT that im fearing, but SHIT that im hearing / catch feelings in the enternet battles that leave ya eyes tearing / ya wanna use big words so let me leave you apprehensive / these intolerable lyrics that lacerate ya vocals that make you stop bitchin / spit all your multis but still monosyllabic / my flows slowly leak through like they were venomous / just because my record is 5-2 dont be disarmed / because whatever my record may be ya still in harm / ya daddy raped you on ya'lls farm, spitten nothing but hate while your analy bleeding in the barn / please shut the fuck up cause your not intone / gettin ya ass pounded like sylvester stallone / still sore from ya visit to prison ya gay whore / im not gonna match 20 lines cause your just a fucking bore............... 1 out............. im tierd |
nice fed verse
anyhow voting time ya'll oh yeah and the three things were only 3 things: death taxes and your merking in this battle learn to read |
how are you gonna lecture me about dis shit....................
you had to edit ya own shit for spelling................. stupid ass people these days......... holla............................. |
settin crew aside and everything....... my vote goes in this one fair......
Chrit.....every line in his verse was a punch and a solid one too lilsmokey...some good punches but alot of fillers. Chrit.... alot of punches that made u say Damn... lilsmokey nothing really caught my attention..... Chrit....verse structure was very good and easy to follow lilsmokey....u just straight lost me man.. so to that heres my two cents....... vote=Chrit |
It's not nice to feed my friend.
But, anywayz. Here is the rating. Vocab=Both. Flow=Lilsmokey. Rhyme Scheme=Both Metaphors=Chrit by alittle. Punchlines=Both came hard. Vote=Chrit Reason=Chrit's punchlines just came harder along with tha good scheme. Yall both flowed pretty good. I liked this battle. Basically Chrit beat you. I am too tired to finish explaining. I won't quote so take my word. G H O S T. |
aight this looks bad
3 crew members and all but heres the reason im going pro-chrit My advice for this kid is to no-show and I'll explain what that lesson is all about/ You see its better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to open you mouth and remove all doubt when did u go to word perfect?!?!?!? |
ya daddy raped you on ya'lls farm, spitten nothing but hate while your analy bleeding in the barn /
^^^^^^^ This lost the battle.............wtf? Not a good punch w/s/e Neways^^^^ The line scarface has above is what did it for me as well Good shit: Vote: Chrit |
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you got alot of pussy votes there buddy
crew shouldnt count.................. ...........1 out................................ |
i'ma vote Chrit....
Yall flowed good. Vocab=Both Flow=Lilsmokey Rhyme Scheme=Both Metaphors=Chrit Punchlines=Chrit Vote=Chrit Reason= His punches were just harder, simple as that Battle was a good one though |
My cpu is fuckin about so igotta post again to vote sorry.
do not class this as frepost it was nessecery to vote. (i cant spell) |
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