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UnEmceeable 05-13-03 11:59 PM

Trip Marxx vs. x-signals
 
Rules:
10 Lines min – 30 lines max
Check in: Thursday
Verses by: Saturday

Voting is all done by poll now!

Good Luck

Trip Marxx 05-14-03 12:03 AM

Checkin.....16 lines........I'ma do that 30 way too long......match that when ya check in.......Sound good?

x-signals 05-14-03 11:38 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Trip Marxx
Checkin.....16 lines........I'ma do that 30 way too long......match that when ya check in.......Sound good?



yeah werd when ya postin lets make it sooner than sat hows bout today we both post aight

Trip Marxx 05-14-03 09:45 PM

I could knock my verse by tomorrow......I got alotta work with finals runnin this week an shit......so what ya say?

x-signals 05-16-03 12:34 PM

if you dont get the word-play or personals dont vote.



it started as a simple battle but he's wak so i'll take it there
ima slit his throat then trip marxxx down a case of stair's
^^i was just warmin up but dun think you wont get bang'd
he think's he'll win, well T'LL C and i aint talkin lopez and the gang
yeah we know ya weak so it's he'll get hurt then he's gone
when im thru, you'll be the dude the doc in ya avy does surgery on
it aint my fault i keep deniein warlords, this wakest crew wants me
cause they know X dont play you can ask ja-rule and ashanti
yeah its true i dont play games with this faggot homo
''and you thought i was wak''.... i dun think i know so
claims he's king of this shit well he's about to be de-throned
have his hood throwin up MW not for mid-west but M.ay W.e go home
claimin mid-west when he know damn well he from alabama
fuck this battle wanna make the site laff ? hey go by a camera


yeah im just givin 14

Trip Marxx 05-16-03 05:49 PM

Verse In
 
*Watch ur-self........*


X's rhymes supposed to be concrete...so why is this foreman demolishing bricks?
Ya find X pickin up all of his limbs...but he says he playin pick up sticks!
Couldn't hit the right tone or pitch...my wind-ups more complicated than Hideo Nomo
This kids a homo eatin fruit chews...an spits all colors of the rainbow! (haha...)
X just a net ho, give em two boobs an a pussy...then you be callin him a nympho!
I stand here punchin ya harder than tai-bo...While you flow softly like the wind blows!
You plain simp-le, givin me no challenges...like retarted kids in special ed classes!
This cat claims ill transportation...find him staggin curbs an whippin out bus passes!
Focus more on chemistry an atomic masses...duke, you ain't NEVER gonna be a rapper
You and me? We ain't no Cinderella an I can tell you this won't end in Happily Ever After!
This cat brings a room full of laughter...oh no! Warning! Watch out! Cuz X could kill you next
He thinks this is a Novel Writing Contest...thats why he states hes the King of text! (lol....)
X is a verbal wreck...his signals are fuzzy characters on my television set
Which means HIS SIGNALS ARE WEAK! He gambled on this battle an said he was his best bet!
You a ROOKIE messin with a VET...when I'm done, you'll toss the mic down an retire!
Makin this run against me was mixin water an fire...washed ya out till ya flame was expired!


Theres mine........lets start the votes.........

Ich Heisse 05-16-03 05:53 PM

My vote goes to X for this shit. That kid came wit some ill as fuck punches. You my boy Trip but this nigga wrecked it. His line bout Trippin you down the stairs awas ill... my vote goes to X.

Trip Marxx 05-16-03 05:59 PM

More votes up in here.....remember to poll vote ya'll......................................100 character shit.......................

Jackmioff 05-16-03 08:28 PM

Ummm...
 
Ich...... Get off X's Nuts.

if you dont get the word-play or personals dont vote.

^^Blah.. Stop Putting That. Foreal!!

X-Signals::

it started as a simple battle but he's wak so i'll take it there
ima slit his throat then trip marxxx down a case of stair's

^^Hmm.. 3.5

^^i was just warmin up but dun think you wont get bang'd
he think's he'll win, well T'LL C and i aint talkin lopez and the gang

^^lol..5.5

yeah we know ya weak so it's he'll get hurt then he's gone
when im thru, you'll be the dude the doc in ya avy does surgery on

...3.5

it aint my fault i keep deniein warlords, this wakest crew wants me
cause they know X dont play you can ask ja-rule and ashanti

HaHa.. Nice, 7.0

yeah its true i dont play games with this faggot homo
''and you thought i was wak''.... i dun think i know so

lool.. good shit, nice wordplay.. 7.5

claims he's king of this shit well he's about to be de-throned
have his hood throwin up MW not for mid-west but M.ay W.e go home

lol..... 4.0

claimin mid-west when he know damn well he from alabama
fuck this battle wanna make the site laff ? hey go by a camera

Played..... Weak Too, You Could've worded it better. 3.5

[/b]Overall:: 34.5



[b]Triple Marxx::


X's rhymes supposed to be concrete...so why is this foreman demolishing bricks?
Ya find X pickin up all of his limbs...but he says he playin pick up sticks!

^^Not bad.. Not Good.. 5.0

Couldn't hit the right tone or pitch...my wind-ups more complicated than Hideo Nomo
This kids a homo eatin fruit chews...an spits all colors of the rainbow! (haha...)

^^lool.. Kinda Stupid but made me laugh. 4.5

X just a net ho, give em two boobs an a pussy...then you be callin him a nympho!
I stand here punchin ya harder than tai-bo...While you flow softly like the wind blows!

^^Ahh..5.0

You plain simp-le, givin me no challenges...like retarted kids in special ed classes!
This cat claims ill transportation...find him staggin curbs an whippin out bus passes!

^^Could've been worded alot betta.. 2.0

Focus more on chemistry an atomic masses...duke, you ain't NEVER gonna be a rapper
You and me? We ain't no Cinderella an I can tell you this won't end in Happily Ever After!

^^Blahhhh.. 1.0

This cat brings a room full of laughter...oh no! Warning! Watch out! Cuz X could kill you next
He thinks this is a Novel Writing Contest...thats why he states hes the King of text! (lol....)

Ehh.. 2.0

X is a verbal wreck...his signals are fuzzy characters on my television set
Which means HIS SIGNALS ARE WEAK! He gambled on this battle an said he was his best bet!

^^Could've been worded betta............. 4.0

You a ROOKIE messin with a VET...when I'm done, you'll toss the mic down an retire!
Makin this run against me was mixin water an fire...washed ya out till ya flame was expired!

3.5

Overall::27


Vote=X-Signals..

iight,::

I thought this battle was gonna be weaker then it was.. It was decent,
X supriesed me.. an came better then I thought he would.. he had
like 4 lines I like'd... Close battle.. Triple had a good flow, but X
got him in punches.. an that is why he took this battle from Trip..

x-signals 05-17-03 02:28 PM

wow no poll votes dmn im up 2-0 thoe.............................................. .................................................. ..........

Sprungy 05-17-03 06:26 PM

the only line i really liked was the trip marxxxxx line.. which was pretty witty.. i mean nothing hard hitting but just tested his wit a little. x had a better flow,and disses

vote - x-signals

Orikle 05-17-03 09:38 PM

Yeah I felt X's verse, had some weak lines and some good ones too, same as Tripp. Tripp only really had one hard hitting line...here..

This kids a homo eatin fruit chews...an spits all colors of the rainbow!

Gay lines are played but when done well they are still nice...

Nice lines from X.....

yeah we know ya weak so it's he'll get hurt then he's gone
when im thru, you'll be the dude the doc in ya avy does surgery on

^^Nice...

Vote=X-Signals

K.Largo 05-17-03 10:46 PM

i have to give this one to x signals he was just more on point and his punches were good.....trip u just got way to lengthy so punches dont have the same effect ..

vote=X-Signals

Evolve 05-19-03 04:59 PM

Vote Trip Marxx

I actually thought this battle wasnt bad. I like some of X's lines. But i thought Trip's verse hit harder. Some of his shit made me laugh... So im gonna go with Trip

Trip Marxx 05-19-03 06:58 PM

uppin 4 votes............thanks 4 votes......................ya'll.................. .................................................. .......


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