First Flow(sumthin simple)
 

-No Mo playin, step to da hood its ova fo you
-U aint real, no real nigga gon cover fo you
-From Battle raps, to battles wit straps wit cats Im Known
-My click one of a kind, cant be cloned
-S-Dub-T-D Here to set tha game correct
-You want a War, I'll bring it to you live and direct
-Like tha one in Iraq, only u Saddam
-So get ready to feel my hard to handle lyrical bombs
-Can u hear me now.... Good
-So its understood, that you cant halt my reign
-I been in da game, fa street fame, not to entertain
-Tha Don and Soprano we Two of a kind
-My main nigga, and my partner in rhyme
-Like Tha X-Men, my niggaz is street mutants
-Reppin none other than tha hood of Southwest Houston
-So who ya choosin, tha realest or tha fake
-Im a street cat, wont hesitate to take what u make
-If you hear rounds dont worry bout who shot em
-...Just know I got em
-Mics I roc em, Bitches I drop em
-If a hoe try to leave I wont stop em
-Cuz on my raps im focused, say Im not real, and I say u bogus
-When I break mics I send shock waves
-S.W.T.D From tha cradle to tha grave

.Hot.
 

This joint was hot kid... I liked the wordplay. For a newbie, you got some skills. Uppin' this joint.

i dont understand why newbies feel they've gotta always drop their first post as "guns, i'm tough and bitches" subject matter.

being original is 50% of a good piece. and i saw a lot of played concept and vocab in this, there were one or two stand out lines here:

Like Tha X-Men, my niggaz is street mutants

-From Battle raps, to battles wit straps wit cats Im Known
-My click one of a kind, cant be cloned

^^best lines in it

just up the vocab and add a few multis, think of an original concept that you can relate to and you'll be on your way.

yo ya wanna battle?????

yo my bad wrong thing..........one