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Young Cel 05-15-03 08:35 PM

8 bars back to the forums
 
Like a cruel angel, I descend upon my enemies
The dreaded legend spawned in sudden genesis
Ageless sentences have transcended all apprentices
Conclusions venomous, I am Heaven's seventh nemesis

Cuervo's dreams seem strange, like delicate delusions
Stolen souls infused in runes shatter his illusions
He's just confused, too soon his worst nightmares come true
Viewed askew thru rose lenses too gorgeous turns gruesome

thats all i have not this is just a lil man

swAy302 05-15-03 09:06 PM

that wasnt bad~~~>

Young Cel 05-15-03 09:57 PM

thanx man

LiViD 05-16-03 12:10 AM

I liked it.....needs more...good vocab....good imperfect rhymes......good flow.....I want more with it......

Young Cel 05-16-03 02:21 AM

i got you man


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