Dirtboy69 vs. Kid_frozt
 

Check ins are Due by Sunday.
Verses Are Due Tuesday.
Votes Are due Thursday.

Topic...

ear to ear

checkin in i'm going to post by sunday morning i guess

i keep on getting a message too short message so i am just filling space don't pay attention to this ahahahahahahhahaahhahaa

yo im checkin in as well mad so ill get this verse posted whenever i see dirts shit so be expectin some shit 100

here's my verse a little quick thing cause i just couldn't get into this topic

I was looking out the window when I first saw them together/
Hugging and kissing and I thought she was to be my lover/
Got in his car and took off fast thinking that they were clever/
Pissed beyond control I go grabbing my largest knife/
Jump in my car cause today I’m ending more then one life/
I’m a slit necks to smear blood from ear to ear/
I’m drinking too much bear just to smoother my fear/
Only so when I get there what I gotta do is clear/
At the door of a cheap hotel room twenty four/
“who is it?” (then me)”bloody gore is in store so open the door”/
“I’m calling the cops!!” but all I do is laugh hysterically/
“go ahead cause I’ll be punching holes in you sporadically/
Flinging blood, your intestinal track spilled out on the floor/
My lover now screaming fanatically at all of the gore/
Me with a grin from ear to ear I turn to who’s next/
She’s desperate clinging to my leg and offering sex/
Now I turn the narrative into a very simple question/
Do I go ahead and kill her? Or has she learned a lesson?/

ear-to-ear is like mind-to-mind
lemme spell it out like braille for the blind
lyrically speakin this fool fell off the topic
I know its shockin but those lines suck cock man
u should re-adjust find a new plan
fucked up so bad now apologize to mad man
so lemme talk to u ear to ear
dont get too close bitch cause i aint queer
just when i seen that post i had to adhear
slap u like a bitch tell u "Damn I'm thirsty how bout a beer" (from training day)
he picked the topic since u missed it ima "sear"(like to burn)
this to ur brain give u common sense remove all ur fears
escort u to the whackness center tell em they next bitch is here
give u a mentor so the mods dont go crazy
fuckin wit me will make ur mind lazy like u smokin haze be
i aint shady just tryin ta be a pal
but i send u off the deepend like jack black or shallow hal

nice vote uppin this



aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa///stop this 100 character thingaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa//////////////

uppin


vote on this please i need to get votes for this really bad please someone vote why don't you vote (i really don't like this min character thing)

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Um...My vote goes to DirtBoy. His verse wasn't great or anything, but it was better than Kid Frozt's, so he gets my vote.

Frozt - This is a topical "open mic". Its a song. Not a battle. The only "battling" that actually happens is the fact that one persons song is compared to another persons song, and finding which one is better. Other than that, there is no battling.

DirtBoy - You have potential, you just need inspiration and motivation. Your going to get a lot (I mean a lot!) better if you keep writing. P.s. Bear = Hairy animal. Beer = Alcoholic drink.

Id go like bruklor... if I had 100 posts I'd vote for DirtBoy... His verse was okay, nothing incredible... But Frozt's wasn't real great at all... DirtBoy's seemed good just seemed like he was cuttin corners at times and looking for rhymes, making rhymes into his sentences instead of making sentences around his rhymes... What do I know I'm new at this too : ). So like bruk if I could I'd go with DirtBoy.

2-0 for me uppin for more if there's time for more i think the new threads go up today don't they?? anyway this was a pretty good battle i hope next week is better !!! ggdsgghsdujghbjfihnreuinbdfhber

Vote - Dirty

Like mentioned above, this isnt a text battle at all. Your battling your own limits and creativity, not the person your opposing.