ScottyC vs. Trip Marxx
 

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Topic...

bleeding prints

chek in 1-2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Bleeding Prints....I found this one hard to do....this is my first topical battle....so I hope ya'll can follow this....specially with this topic.....


*A man whose life is going the wrong way...trys to find happiness...the easy way*



Photos bring back memories of one's past back to a vivid and emotional reality
Plagued by tears an death were pictures in their heads of a preventable tragedy
Denial an broken-hearted relatives with an excuse for the loss of a close element
Cannot believe whats irrelevant...a perfect mind that will be lost forever permanent
Whats left is a scarred sentiment...inscripted deep in the familys heads...caused pain
People ask questions like, "Why did he do that?" and "Was he wrong in the brain?"
Now all thats left is his name...unknown to the world until a discovery has been made
Envisions to find the meaning of this persons existence was a path to be taken astray
The burden never looks our way...to seek a portrait of talent sought a difficult task
A human being not made of many words was golden...never was dull like brass
Situations in his life came upon him too fast...stress pushed tensions that drained him
Stayed away from his friends and family...left alone to relieve his hatred...the ultimatium
Problems inside had gotten to him...cell structures malfunction cease to mute his mind
He pulls out photographs taken throughout his life...looks at them for one last time
Sadness seeps down his eyes as he grabs a blade...grazes it across his wrist an slit
Blood pours out of his veins as he screams in terror...cannot believe what he did
Stains covered the floor in minutes...the pictures still carressed tightly in his palm
His mother walks in on her son...whose body is quietly slumped an appearing calm
What had she ever done wrong? She'll never know why he chose for his life to end
Eternal answers will find their way to them...the answers are in the bleeding prints

this is a v.hard topic but here we go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

like i said before and i say again,this bitch trip marx will die in pain/
cuz this is a battle i need to gain, so me n the boys jump on tha train/
and we go on along to marxxs house to release the blood from his brain/
when we put the strain on his head with this blunt tool, we take away his chance of fame/
and when we move his body to his moms car and drive way, the rain bounces/
cuz this bitch is dead we killed him like a lion pounces, and we jus took his ounces/
were on our way out in the get away vehicle, wit the police behind, we need a miricle/
we got a marxx body on the back seat decomposing like an canibal/
i got blood on my hand so if i get pulled, im in shit for havin bloody prints/
and if the car runs out of gas, crashes and dints, i will jump through the window and sprint/
untill i get caught and finger printed for this bitches murderous killing/
i was sat in the cop car pillin, cuz i jus killed trip marx while he was chillin/

aight.....well lets get the votes in here..........100 character garbage.............................

Ai yo..........both verses in..........could we please get some votes up in on this topical?? Much respected......................................... .........................

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Vote Trip Marxx for obvious reasons

Tripp your story wasnt that bad... some of the flow was off but i was able to follow nicely along. Had some nice imagery and the concept was pretty good. Scotty, i guess, just didnt understand what a topical battle was.

Trip: had a nice verse even though the flow was off at times. he had good imagery and stayed on point throughout even tho it was a tuff topic.

Scotty: dunno what he was thinking. his verse was very simplistic and like evolve said "i guess he just didnt understand what a topical battle is."

Vote: Trip Marxx

Thanx for the votes...........more poll votes are needed up in here.............................................. .................................................. ................................

If I could vote I'd go for Trip Marxx... Like the other's said Scotty's stuff was too short and clearly not as good as Trip Marxx's. Good job Trip

Much appriciated.............thanx all for the votes..............we need more poll votes cuz theres only 1 poll vote an 3 votes all together....ill hit up ya'lls battles tomorrow.....

They don't have enough posts to vote, you need 100 posts. And what sucks for me is I still need 100 characters.

ok Trip won this one BY ALOT! scotty, i dont know what you thinkin dawg, but this is a TOP-I-CAL BATTLE! there aint supposed to be no punchlines against ur opponent. you might be looking for RBBL not RBTL. TRipp gets my vote