TREACH P vs. Mad Man
 

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Verses Are Due Tuesday.
Votes Are due Thursday.

Topic...

The dullest star

Checkin' In. I have a trip to go on, so mine might be a little late aight.

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Oh and if you need an idea of a topical battle, just tell me, and I'll pm you a link to a good one!

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I gotta leave on a plane today, so my verse might be a little late. Sorry about the inconveinence. I hate having to enter 100 characters.

I look up at the sky, and try to find my star/
To find it is near impossible, you must look near and far/
See my star is the dullest on them all/
Barely able to convey it's signal/
But it's light shines through, as it's been doing for years/
Only on the darkest of nights does it truly appear/
But looking at it, fills me with faith/
Something weak can be strong even in this place/
See just like that star, I barely stand out/
No one notices me, and it fills me with doubt/
What is happening what is my life about/
But when I go astray, I just look at my star/
With the moon roof open looking out from my car/
See I know that up there, that star gets bullied around/
But just like me that star doesn't make a sound/
It tunes it all out, and just shines through the night/
It doesn't even put up a fight/
Because that star knows it's time will come/
Just like mine will by tomarrow's next sun/
See people are watching my star right from their sofa/
Cause just like me, my star's about to go NOVA!/
And so will I tomarrow morning you see/
Because to work the next day Ima bring a gun with me/
Ima blow up and I'll take them all with me/
I'll be in heaven with my star next to me/


I prewrote the first 6 and everything else was just where I felt it go from there. Hell, I didn't even think it would end like that until 2 minutes ago.

Ayo never liked school never seemed to be the brightest star,
Always got an A in english failed the rest teachers said id never go far,
Money i saved up went into drugs thats why you wont see me with a car,
Grew up in a broken home struggled to pay rent , everything else is on loan,
Started trustin cowards hangin out wit snitches,
Kept the chamber loaded always held glitches,
Never had many friends always was a bit of an out cast,
It was like everyone was sailin smooth and i had a broken mast,
Tried to pretennd i didnt bring it on myself ignoredmy past,
Visoins of death began to haunt me in my dreams,
Head so swollen it felt like it was splittin from the seams,
My visions began more clearly as i began to see the white pearly gates,
My emotions floated away no more debts and rates,
The next day i put a glock to my headed ended it all,
Floated up to heaven it as like burstin through a wall,
God asked me if i wanted to become A STAR i said never wanted to be bright so he made me the DULLEST STAR,

MY PUNCHES MAY SOUND SIMILAR BUT I PRE WRITED IT SO THATS how it was peace man i hate this 100 charters bullshit.......................................... ......

i cant really decide... i'll come back and edit later... 100chars100,100o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o 0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o

Money i saved up went into drugs thats why you wont see me with a car,
Grew up in a broken home struggled to pay rent , everything else is on loan,///WTF that is all fiction

Kept the chamber loaded always held glitches,///fiction
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i dunno ummm mad man ur only a good battler i didnt really like ur stuff........i mean simple wordplay simple vocab........same with treach P but i think his shit was better.......no disrespeckt......even thought he was sayin a lot of fictional shit

my breakdown of this battle:

volcab- treach p
flow- really close but treach p

story- niether i really didn't like the topic it doesn't give for a story so this doesn't really apply too much overall i liked treach p's better

i don't know much else to say except that this 100 character post thing has really screwed up this site

my vote=treach p

what in the hell treach...
your punches...good luck
winning with punches in
the topical league....

im mean. your story was
pretty much completly fiction
i doubt any of that has to
do with you....you arent
the brightest star...you
strayed from the topic a
hell of a lot...

madman...

i didnt like your verse...but
when i read treachs i mean..
you win....lmao....by a lot

vote madman

enuf said
except i kinda did like Mad's verse
had complexity

vote : Mad Man

The next day i put a glock to my headed ended it all,
Floated up to heaven it as like burstin through a wall,
God asked me if i wanted to become A STAR i said never wanted to be bright so he made me the DULLEST STAR,
This the only shit fiction the rest has happend but i was doing this story from anyones perspective from a street kinda person
thsi was a hard topic to do , how come the other guy didnt poll vote for me.If you didnt like his verse than why did you vote for him?I didnt really mean that bout punches but as i explained i wrote down my verse before i battled so..........................

Money i saved up went into drugs thats why you wont see me with a car,
Grew up in a broken home struggled to pay rent , everything else is on loan,///WTF that is all fiction

And trill whattthe fuck do you no do you siddenly just know my ife i did grow up in a broken home and everythin else was always on loan so dont tell me whats fiction mutherfuvker.i hate it when people just assume your lying is pisses me off

ok my vote goes to mad man, same reasons that blaze said, no use in repeasting the same shit over and over again
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Vote = MAD MAN