New Random barz
 

And it all seems so obscene to me
This undeniable gravity
Speaks to me with soft spoken tokens of attitude
Just take a toke on this smoke young buck
Don't you know the buck stops here?
No need to fear the tip of that spear
It's just self-serving sacrifice
Of unrighteous minds
And true inspiration finds only lies inside
But my muse is beautiful, pure energy
It would take ten of me to abuse that tool
Fool, you think I ain't real?
This here is art in its purest form
I'm not normal, so if you can't feel it
Just say so and I'll lay low for a few months
All I've got is time to appeal to the deeper mind
You've got more issues than daily papers
High-ups misused sky scraper capers
End up crucified with missiles and staples
This shit is thousand ply tissues
Thicker than the horizontal surface on every level
Now you wanna talk about devils?
Solar devas birthed this work of verses
And I intend to keep it that way
Stay up and maintain brains above the frayed ends of sanity
Banish me, but I will return to divide these factions
Read between the captions, that's the reason for my actions

feed back please

yo some of those lines didnt rhyme properly...............u need to spit abuot topics

yeah word man

Looked like a bunch of words jammed together about nothing...Elevate...good try..some lines were ok.

eah lets battle man you have to get a 100 post and your close to set up the battle ight man

Listen here rookie, I've been here longer than you think..We can battle anytime..I'll post nonsense just so we can ok?...Young Cel...lol...you make me laugh

ught man i really dont care who you think you can beat or how long lets go man

yea like everyone said, your just sayign shit cause it rhymes

hell no

Whack drop

rap about somethin man, it does seem like you put words together cuz they rhyme, you talk about one thing in one half of a bar, the other half is about something else. overall the topic and words were sloppy

^^notices th etitle...random barz....accepts the fact that the post has no topic....and is just...as the name implies...random barz...

dun i was feelin it...beleive,its good to just let shit out sometimes intoa mish mash of nothin ,somethign that has no topic,somethign that has no meaning,is completely pointless in all aspects of what is seen as a 'normal rap'....foreal dun im feelin ya,i too sometimes just fuck a topic an babble on,i dont postem but i do it to let loose steam an shit you nahmean...the lines didnt all rhyme...their random barz,they didnt have atopic...random barz...i dunno wha tmad epeole overlook the fact that thi sis infact just random barz,but they did...forget it cel...its aiight,wasnt amazing,but i liked it,its good to see someoen does the same thing as me from time to time.......once i heard a busta rhymes song,dissing nothing,sayin this and that about nothng,and hes one of te most acclaimed artists out...spittin about nothing......sure i like to read shi twith a meanign and topic,i like to write shit with a plot and story,peopel liek to read an dlisten to them,but writing abou tnothing...is harder then you think...see you coud start abou tnothign easily...very easily an dthen get carried away and start doing a battle verse by accident,you dont even realize it...writing verses about nothin is difficult at times,to pull of is even harder,to write an ill one is almost impossible,but if it lets out stress and steam and all that bullshit,its doing something for ya innit...i honestly dont know why you posted it,maybe you got bored or whatever,but yeah...i los tmy train of thought for now....maybe ill remebr later...keep uppin dun....you need to elevate some,that was evident throughout the rhyme...but practice makes perfect,writtin grandom barz helps me elevate crazy heights....sugest yall try it...it sharder then it seems sometimes.....maybe ya might wanna peep a artist named,noah23....he sometimes writes abou tnothign verse...with lines like.....farm hand fork,onion squash,spoon sort....wristwatch megahertz,energy burst,lickshots.....i go tno idea what hes talin about,its completly random it seems,its prolly got a message some where but only he knows it.......peep him sometime,hes an illbattle cat too.....god damni gottastop ramblin ahahha......but its good to give peopel soemthing to read....instead of one word one line rplies mos to fhte time....


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