some new shit "murder minded"
 

yo 4-5 and im ready to flip,no holds bar , if you fucken wit chips
im a flip a wig , never cared what i did , never cared what i say
im blast wit ak's , its mayday , payday nigga never thhout young guns pulled these trigger, never hold guns cause im that luqer
cats better run, ill off that nigga , spark the weedup , park the car
stash that heater , wild 100 know im off the meter
wife wife beaters , twin seatser , we hold heater , every that we go, cause we ready for war, never thought 4-5 will rip before
hit da flow cause im real dirty dirty and you cats cant hurt me
got the shout guns and gats dispursen , put u in the dirt qucik
my nevers sick , im sick in the brian, cause this earth shit, this turf shit , never turned on the block ,workin ,for certain , cats better foucs , never really wrote this , yall gonna try to quote this ,
all you pussys, better open ya eyes , put the mic done , cause dope on the rise , catche ya pies , get ya work , let me hold the gun way i speak my words, shits obsurd ya heard the word
panama on tha block still slang my fucken birds

ummmmmmmmmm this was whack , , No wordplay ,, up ur Vocab

first two lines made me stop readin, elevate is the word for you, but keep spittin

practice dogg... it was wack. go to the wackness emergency center for some tips

whatever its some gangsta shit i put on a track, and it seems to sell pretty nice, so tell my coustemers it's wack , yall just somebackpackin rappers anyways , who dont understand how this game works

...yes and this is an example of wht the game'is' an dhow it 'works'....please....if you cant accept criticism dont post....you honestly think you had this verse down tight,sure you might sell,but who gives a fuck about tha...hip hop is elevation...wich you need alot of....if its ill on audio good work,im happy for ya...but ifyour gonna call peopelthat took the time to peep your shit and comment,even thgouht they idnt have to,even though you didnt like the comments they gave,backpak rappers,who dont understand the game,then dun you badly mistaken,you seriousy need to up in my eyes,no offence,but you do,you nned ot work on vocab,maybe multies if you want...the flow needs work...you need alot of work,and if your gonna come aroun dtalkin like you know whats best,then why did you post in her ein the first place...if you rso into this game andunderstand how it works,go back to seelin mixtapesout the back o fyou rtruck an stop postin...dafuck.