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Domestic Violence!
He listened inventively through the vaguely opened door//
His raw ear, repeating all the equivalent shit, he’s put up with// Since the age of four, his little dead beat brain, can’t put up with more// His emotionless zombie eyes, have seen enough gore, but to him// It’s not over yet, unnecessary banal violence, his parents have inflicted// From the moment they met, social status they both defected// On those long frozen nights, the helpless insecure kid was neglected// From no-one this petrified son was protected, by the time he’s 20// AIDS this alienated child will be infected, only then will he be released from// The years of unnecessary hurt and emotion, from then on he’ll look after no.1// (HOOK): Domestic violence (whispered x5) His childhood years, was the sentimentally cause for his adolescent tears// Terrified timid fears, from the age of 7, was his solitary believably excuse// For sending his malevolence mom and dad to heaven, the unforgettable times// He struggled with domestic abuse, at school he was the lonely invisible recluse// Sooner or later he was heading for blowing a hidden fuse, when the time came// He sought no compassion from a loving son, instead he inhumanly butchered// His alcoholic, prostitutionalised mom, this kind of sick repulsive acts// He found unbelievably fun, his dad, who was no forlorn stranger from compulsive drinking// He never quite knew what his whacked, inebriated brain was thinking, every day// His compassionate feelings were slowly sinking, but his impassive heart// Would never say, until one miserable day, he found out he was too late// When his deluded son, stuck a jagged samurai sword, in his prostate// (HOOK) |
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thanx, uppin for some more feedback
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ooooo Wordplay was Blazin , , this is one of ur Illest drops that i have Read
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ty people!
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yo this is pretty decent
Great Vocab Good subject matter, little on short side but its text keep rhyming dawg, ill be peepin yo audio when u get down 2 it |
*COUGH COUGH*... Wow this flow was ill....sick verses....got me coughin lol
Sooner or later he was heading for blowing a hidden fuse, when the time came// He sought no compassion from a loving son, instead he inhumanly butchered// His alcoholic, prostitutionalised mom, this kind of sick repulsive acts// He found unbelievably fun, his dad, who was no forlorn stranger from compulsive drinking// He never quite knew what his whacked, inebriated brain was thinking, every day |
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