freestyle
 

Still working on it but i gots this so far...

How is one suppose to grow old |
when the weather is so cold? |
Ya cant walk down the block anymore wearing certain colors |
The curtain is closed over the faces of the dead |
The color red stains the ground |
If you dont die from the first attack the wound |
Will bring ya down |
The family you have will frown |
Ya will become the talk of the town |
All because ya didnt know what was safe anymore |
Some niggas be scared now to go out the front door |
Packing heat to beat the fast pace of the street |
Others grab the mic and try to gain the flow over a rich beat |
Then the ones that dont stray off alone head and become part of the same fleet |
That killed the one they loved so much. |

Well thats it like I said im still working on it, but thats what I got for now.

ground |
wound |that dont rhyme
wack wack wack...how can u keep workin on a freestyle lol....and there's no freestyling allowed in Open Mic if u wanna do that shit u gots ta go to Cypher beyatch

One word..................!!!!!!!!!!!!WHACK!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

give me a W
give me a H
give me an A
give me a C
give me a K

what does that spell??

WHACK WHACK WHACK

yes this was
obviously not
high on the
talent level.

i would like to
see people like
you elevate by
becoming more
artistic. less thug
bullshit. you
know what i mean.

keep doing your
thing. welcome
the criticism.

yeah the thug shit is annoying,you wont go nowhere with it,expand your mind,and become perceptive of all things...once you do that and rhyme abou tit ,its not only easier i find,but alot more rewarding,and will be received more then "Packing heat to beat the fast pace of the street" the street might be fast,but you want to improve the situation,not worsen it by speaking of it in a gangsta"ill shoot you coz im a hard fool"way....keep droppin,expand ,elevate,focus on vocabulary building...keep going,dont let no thought,non-constructive remarks dishearten you....