First Freestyle
 

This right here is my initial flow on this board.........holla and let me know what you feel about this white kid from the burbs..............


Ok first of all let me get a few things off my chest/
Wordplay busts my nut off like sucking a pair of breats/
And really dawg, let's not be overly concerned about my skin tone/
I'm not Eminem, and sure as hell no Vanilla Ice clone/
Instead Im the lyrical scientist's interesting new creation/
So what if I'm not black like Microsoft's Xbox or Playstation/
Does that mean I'm not equipped to handle the sickest flow?/
So what I'm not iced out in my throwback rollin in stacks of dough/
Originality is what I'm chasin, not Aston Martin and Mercedes Benz/
What the hell you tryin to prove Syke? well I guess it all really depends/
The methods of my madness have yet to take form and be defined/
I'm willing to battle or flow with you, just not into wasting my time/
Now you can sit there and tell me how ridiculous you might think this sounds/
But when the smoke clears on this circus, be rest assured I ain't the clown/
With all that being said let me end on this other note/
Keep me in the back of your mind like cum in the back of Elton's throat

what you think?

Syke

thats tight man. at times i wondered where it was going like "But when the smoke clears on this circus" but u brought it back with "I ain't the clown" i also liked the opening line i reckon u should get a battle goin on

And really dawg, let's not be overly concerned about my skin tone/
I'm not Eminem, and sure as hell no Vanilla Ice clone//who the fuck cares wehre u from adn what ya look like....if someone is a mexican rapper they dont call him a B Real wanna be....
interesting new creation/
So what if I'm not black like Microsoft's Xbox or Playstation/agsainst bringin up the racism and the clolor seperation shit.........

weak flow weak vocab u came pretty weak..........try again

this should have been better , , , ,Add some vocab and wordplay