B.r.e Presnets (a Dedication To 2pac)
 

yo peep this drop by me,Tamaira,an emotional drop,yeah i hope ya feed off this piece,dedicated to 2Pac Shakur,,,,,,,,,,,B.R.E........... on September 13th,a great man died on that day ,the whole world cried some say that he's gone, the ex-con but in mah heart,the legend live on (repeat) verse 1: i can't believe what's going on in my eyes/ my black brothas are fallin apart in one blink of an eye/ sometimes i wonder why/ takin time shit down and remenising while i cry/ we can't forget about 2Pac Shakur/ cause he's tha tru ghetto warrior/ that's why we all gotta keep our heads up/ and never give up/ we need less killin,less hatin and more luvin/ while da lord jesus christ praise me wit his blessins/ you truly was tha original gangsta/ rest in peace 2Pac we luv ya/ man all tha tight memories that i'll never forget/ i know every emcee wants to follow ur footsteps/ tha informing of your death hit me like a knife to my chest/ i know you're watchin down on us while we're reppin you to da fullest/ September 13th was tha darkest day/ and it was tha day that you passed away/ it was also tha day this rap game changed in every way/ i know that you're alive in every one's heart today/ cause your beautiful spirit is here to stay/ you truly was tha original gangsta/ rest in peace 2Pac we luv ya/ (chorus) on September 13th,a great man died on that day,the whole world cried some say that he's gone,the ex-con but in mah heart,the legend lives on (repeat)

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vocab coulda been upped, subject was aight, but it started off talkin about how the black men r dropin like flys or some shit, then you got on topic,

ima give this a 6-7 out of 10

Yea, this was AITE could have been better and to PAC R.I.P
stay up playaz

This was tight

nice drop needs mo vocab doe but it's hard

up da vocab n stuff but otherwise good topicz and real stuff

yeah need s a bit better vocab.................

yeah i agree with all before
it was a good topic and shit
but yo another thing, change the paragraph format to show the bars cuz it makes it difficult to read how it is

uppin for fam

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I think the subject was great. I feel that lyrically, it could have been better. PS, I don't know of any album so far that can top All Eyes On Me. Just my opinion though.