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Unborn Rap
Short key
My pen is leaking of ink, sinking deep in the page as the rage is released// I seize to capture the beat, the feat is lost to the peace thats left incomplete// I piece the words in my head, instead of writing of feelings I keep stealing my thoughts// Reminded of shots, all the squads Ive forgot, until my pen is a memory, blank from blood clots// I drop the pen in the trash, grab a marker of sort and distort the distractions, I'm tired of this rappin// A label attraction? When the fuck will it happen? Its too late for school, I can't dual with fractions// My faction has failed, I cant excell in the game, I blame the world for my wrong, they never let me belong// My parents foregone, they wouldnt wait on my songs, this rap shits the only one that ever kept me along// I was drawn to money, now its funny you see, I only did it for fame, its what my parents would think was expected of me// A Great Emcee, the best to ever exist, and to think I believed em... then with a moment of grief, they started deceivin// I was achievin a rap, but not in lyrical arts, the heart of the town, people treated me fair, and looked with blank stares// You see I never was born, my mother answered her prayers, I died because her affairs... before I was born, I was killed without care// My rhymes unborn, storing age in the trash, my age was slashed short before I could speak// I was the greatest to rap, entrapped before weeks, but it was I that had, the greatest ever technique.. I managed to rap... without learning to breathe// RIP to those who wont give the chance... ~fade~ |
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god damn....this was ill dun,seriously im likin it immensley...damn the shit was deep as fuck and well put together an all that good shit i can tbe bothered writing...i really liked it,deep as bottomless pits of abyss nahmean...shit dun...yay finally someone else on this board that isnt gangsta...*heart stop*....this was an ill drop skrypted...peep my shit some time eh,zions.....
A label attraction? When the fuck will it happen? Its too late for school, I can't dual with fractions// ^^^ hotttt argh hahah*head explode*.........niceness all round. bismillah |
lmao thanks... tho I dont feel it was near as well written as your making it out to be.
It was like.. I dunno, I told a friend I was gonna drop a quick key and 10 minutes later I checked the screen to see what I wrote... *shrugs* Thanks. |
nah seriously i liked it alot,i never ealized it was a key...my bad...bu tyeha i did like it alot..peep my zions verse dun...
bismillah |
Aight.
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yea, this drop was tight, you ahd good flow, was feelin it most fo the way through!
keep it up! |
Thank you.
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