Flow
 

i kno this may seem basically Rise but uve battled me and you know my style...i kinda have wordplay n multis down but ppl always comment on my flow...my verses are normally pretty long have ya got any advice also...if i change a style in my rhymes is that ok or not like

Ka$$ Has pages of Rhymes, that contains rage in the lines,
controllin my thoughts like they sagin my mind-rhymes have 100yrs of experience which is over 6 times of the age of mine//

but then withoutdoing all that (switch style) shit...can i just be like

Skills Couldnt Surpass, A Kid Like Ka$$, Hes defines a real emcee,
Im Comin To fast Youd never last if you fucked with me//

(...basic shit...just as an e.g.)

also if i wanna get my flow better shud i try doing more like

xxxxxxBOOKxxxxxxCOOK
HOOKxxxxxxPASTxxxxxxLAST
KASTxxxRISExxxxTHIGHS if ya get me....the "xxxx" represent the in between words expect the ones between RISE and THIGHs is

xxx=likes mens...lol

sorry its long but i need to elavate

thanks if you can help

i didnt understand a word you just said.... but i been up for 3 days....

Stay different, get a style of your own & keep it..Thats my advice...final answer

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